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One Late Summer Morn

Sunrise on Swift Creek starts a new day The sun is etching magenta 'pon a misty sky And fog settling low 'pon the ground will stay Changing in the sky a red giant ball shows its dye I wonder if old saying will come true and I sigh Mankind hasn't made much of an arising yet Down where lilacs once bloomed in years gone by But doves awaken from slumber still sing my pet They cajole weary whip-poor-will where sun and earth edify To settle in the brush and quietly lie Down where fuchsia crepe myrtle blooms are open Enjoying the heat of end of a summer's day There's beauty against even the coyotes' den As turmoil goes on, guitar music stops, places decay Dear Lord, let me praise You, and constantly pray
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Evans Avatar
August 28, 2024 at 9:07 AM
Congratulations, Sara! You are an early riser, I can tell... I am the opposite... Lovely. Have a good day.
Kendrick Avatar
August 28, 2024 at 1:35 PM
Yes, a lot of people want to sleep in and stay up late. Thank you, Marilene, for dropping by with congratulations. Sara K
mysore Avatar
August 28, 2024 at 4:59 AM
congratulations dear poet. cheers.
Kendrick Avatar
August 28, 2024 at 1:34 PM
Thank you, Thriveni, for dropping by with congratulations on my work. Sara K
May Avatar
August 27, 2024 at 7:55 AM
Congrats on your win Sara, Very nicely penned
Kendrick Avatar
August 27, 2024 at 8:00 AM
Thank you for dropping by to let me know, Joseph. I appreciate the visit. Sara K
Dutta Avatar
August 21, 2024 at 7:55 AM
So well composed. So neatly arranged the terms. Really I wonder. It is beyond my capability to knit these tough words in same string. Sure to win .
Kendrick Avatar
August 21, 2024 at 1:14 PM
Ahh, Anisha, you can do it. I know you will find a way to knit them together into a wonderful work. Thanks for the visit. Sara K
Buhagiar Avatar
August 21, 2024 at 2:12 AM
Well written using those chosen words.
Kendrick Avatar
August 21, 2024 at 3:52 AM
Why, thank you, Victor. I appreciate the visit. Sara K
Goldsmith Avatar
August 19, 2024 at 11:46 AM
I enjoyed reading your wonderful write. Pretty Picture... "Good Luck" We both did this one. Have a wonderful day writing away.........
Kendrick Avatar
August 19, 2024 at 1:46 PM
I appreciate the visit, Paula. I believe I read your poem for the contest, but maybe I did not. Anyway, thanks for good luck and the wish for having a wonderful day. Sara K
Onclaud Avatar
August 18, 2024 at 9:00 PM
a glorious, sumptuous write paying homage to morning...really enjoyed reading you today, sara!
Kendrick Avatar
August 19, 2024 at 8:50 AM
Your visits are delightful, Nette. I appreciate you dropping by. Your time spent here is appreciated. Sara K
Gasun Avatar
August 17, 2024 at 9:05 PM
This is an outstanding poem my dear poet friend Sara. I love this so much and the ending is superb! My big fave. Thank you so much for sharing. God bless you always and your writings. Hugs
Kendrick Avatar
August 17, 2024 at 10:16 PM
Why, thank you, Len. I appreciate the honor of being faved. I appreciate the time spent here. Sara K
Empress Avatar
August 17, 2024 at 3:33 AM
This is absolutely gorgeous dear sara, youv used all the words provided so well. It isnt an easy task but youv made it work so well! With such beautiful imagery! I love especially “ But doves awaken from slumber still sing my pet” and the ending too! Brilliant take! Best wishes for the contest. Pleasure reading this stunning take. Sending you light always
Kendrick Avatar
August 17, 2024 at 10:15 PM
Why, thank you, IE. I appreciate the visit and time spent here. Well, I am sure there will be so many well written poems in the contest that it will be some very superb competition, and I don't expect much, but I felt the need to write something. Your visit was encouraging. Sara K
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August 16, 2024 at 11:44 AM
What a wonderful poem extolling a late summer morning, Sara. Wonderful word pictures of flowers, birds and animals abiding in God's creation. And it goes without saying, I love your reminder to me to remember to praise God constantly! Beautiful entry for the contest. Best wishes for a win. Blessings!
Kendrick Avatar
August 16, 2024 at 2:01 PM
Sometimes we forget to praise God, Sam, when He made it all possible for mankind. I appreciate the visit and taking time to comment on my work. I need all the blessings I can get, Sam, thanks for sending them to me. Sara K
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August 16, 2024 at 11:11 AM
Dear Sara, I enjoyed reading your late summer morn poem. You created so many great images that are easy to be apart of. I felt I was experiencing it as I read your wonderful words. - Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
Kendrick Avatar
August 16, 2024 at 1:58 PM
Why, thank you, Daniel. I appreciate the visit and the nice comments about my work. I need all the blessings I can get. I hope that the God up above blesses you really good as well. Sara K
George Avatar
August 15, 2024 at 8:18 PM
A wonderful poem. All the select words are appropriately inserted. The new day is presented in all its glory. I am sure this is going to bag a big placement. All the Best, dear Sara.
Kendrick Avatar
August 16, 2024 at 4:53 AM
Thank you, Valsa. I appreciate the visit and you taking time to comment. Sara K
Delaney Avatar
August 15, 2024 at 4:55 PM
That is a vivid sky, Sara worthy of all praise. You paint a nice picture in words. SuZ
Kendrick Avatar
August 16, 2024 at 4:52 AM
Thank you, Suzanne. I appreciate the visit. Sara K
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