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One Last Tear

When the crying seems done and there is nothing left When the sorrow has won and your heart is bereft When your reasoning fails to accept what is true When the torture prevails and there's nothing to do When there's no yes or no as to if you'll survive When your thoughts overflow on just how you'll revive Any closure forestalls... till that one last tear falls February 4, 2019 ~1st Place~ Contest: ALL YOURS (Jun 25) Sponsor: Brian Strand Judged: 06/26/2021 ~3rd Place~ Contest: One Last Tear Sponsor: Silent One Judged: 02/06/2019

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Date: 2/7/2019 11:12:00 AM
A beautiful heartfelt poem Sandra - congratulations on your win - enjoyed this read, though sad! Poetry hugs, Jennifer.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 2/8/2019 7:44:00 PM
Thank you, Jennifer, for your lovely comment and congratulations. I appreciate it very much. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 2/7/2019 3:13:00 AM
- Sandra , congratulations on your great winning poem ... writing about tears is a sensitive theme :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Sandra Haight
Date: 2/8/2019 7:43:00 PM
Thank you, Anne-Lise, for your visit, congrats, and positive comment! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 2/6/2019 3:41:00 PM
Very nice... I would have placed this much higher...BG
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Sandra Haight
Date: 2/8/2019 7:42:00 PM
Thank you, Barbara, for your visit and uplifting and positive comment! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 2/6/2019 2:04:00 PM
deep and emotive poem Sandra.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Sandra Haight
Date: 2/8/2019 7:41:00 PM
Thank you, SO. I enjoyed the contest, and I very much appreciate my placement and your supportive comment. Sandra
Date: 2/4/2019 10:31:00 PM
Beautiful, Sandra. Bravo.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 2/8/2019 7:40:00 PM
Thank you very much, Line. Hugs, Sandra

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