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One Last Tear

Huddled in a corner All alone she sought refuge Her world gone crazy Killing each other for naught One last tear gone unnoticed 2/4/2019

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/15/2019 2:02:00 PM

Interesting work penned. Very expressive. Sara

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/8/2019 7:23:00 PM

So short and poignant, Barbara. Congrats on your win. It's lovely seeing you around here this week

Robert L. Hinshaw

Date: 2/7/2019 7:04:00 PM

Congrats on your well-deserved with for this very insightful verse, BeeGee. Thanks for taking time to read and comment on the Hope write. I miss Vera dearly but she is in a better place now free of all pain and suffering. Her life could be summed up like this: She loved everybody and everybody loved her. Bob

Joseph May

Date: 2/7/2019 6:21:00 PM

A crazy world indeed ..Congrats on your win Barbara..

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/7/2019 3:15:00 AM

- Barbara, congratulations on your great winning poem ... writing about tears is a sensitive theme :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Gershon Wolf

Date: 2/6/2019 6:04:00 PM

Emotive and vivid ink, Barbara. I sure can picture what you've written, even if I can't be sure that I understand it completely. Best wishes, Gershon

Silent One

Date: 2/6/2019 1:56:00 PM

an emotive tanka.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..

Line Gauthier

Date: 2/4/2019 10:32:00 PM

Well penned, Barbara. A beauty.