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*This is an entry for the contest: ‘She sits alone’, Sponsored by Eve Roper. *The poem is required to be written to go with the painting Eve painted. One last kiss She rests in the moment of deep thoughts filled with peace Her long eye lashes shut, to feel everything in her heart increase Finally, she has found her love, as if the skies opened up for her With delicate braided hair, the rest free flowing, her soul does stir With an awakening that greets her, as she sits in calm silence She imagines holding his hand forever, such tender guidance His gentle touch was always savored deep within her mind She knows there is nothing more out there for her to find She is no longer alone, as the golden sun rises upon her today She hears his footsteps coming closer, as he approaches her way She is relaxed and content as she feels the warmth on her face She sighs with slightly parted lips, in this peaceful, quiet, place She is ready to embrace him, while she is surely not to miss His welcomed return to her, always as if it is …one last kiss Heidi Sands 8/4/17 *Placed 1st in Contest: She sits alone/to go with Eve's painting

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Date: 8/14/2017 10:20:00 AM
Congrats, Heidi!
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Heidi Sands
Date: 8/14/2017 10:25:00 AM
Thank you Dale ! :)
Date: 8/13/2017 10:49:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Heidi. A lovely poem.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 8/14/2017 7:55:00 AM
Thank you Subimal :)
Date: 8/13/2017 8:09:00 PM
Thank you for entering my contest, Heidi, love the scene you created a very well-crafted poem with, fantastic flow and rhyme. Congratulations on your win. ~*
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Heidi Sands
Date: 8/14/2017 7:54:00 AM
Thank you Eve. I enjoyed doing this. I hope you have another contest with another one of your paintings. :)
Date: 8/13/2017 7:32:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Heidi! Janice
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Heidi Sands
Date: 8/13/2017 7:38:00 PM
Thank you Janice :)
Date: 8/13/2017 7:04:00 PM
Congrats on your win Heidi
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Heidi Sands
Date: 8/13/2017 7:38:00 PM
Thank you Joseph :)
Date: 8/13/2017 5:52:00 PM
Hi Heidi, an amazing rendition in words of Eve's portrait. Congratulations on your win!
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Heidi Sands
Date: 8/13/2017 6:02:00 PM
Thank you very much Susan! :)
Date: 8/5/2017 4:14:00 AM
You have surely written a magnificent version of her painting into words of beauty! I loved how you molded her into your poem, just like she was standing before us, gorgeously done! I really enjoyed reading this awesome piece this morning, Great Work!!
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Heidi Sands
Date: 8/5/2017 6:17:00 AM
Thank you for taking the time to give your input on this Russell. Your positive encouragement is inspiring :)
Date: 8/5/2017 3:02:00 AM
You have reproduced Eve's painting with words of beauty to perfection dearest, Heidi. Good luck my dear friend!
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Heidi Sands
Date: 8/5/2017 6:16:00 AM
Thank you very much Demetrios :)
Date: 8/4/2017 5:33:00 PM
Very nicely penned Heidi, best wishes in the contest.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 8/4/2017 5:37:00 PM
Thank you very much Joseph :)
Date: 8/4/2017 3:45:00 PM
It's very lovely indeed. And best of luck in the contest Miss Heidi :)
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Date: 8/4/2017 3:47:00 PM
Thank you , Akkina :)
Date: 8/4/2017 3:38:00 PM
- A heartbreaking lovely poem, Heidi - It's perfect for Eve`s painting and the contest, good luck - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Heidi Sands
Date: 8/4/2017 3:40:00 PM
Thank you Sunshine. I did my best to do it for her painting as she is asking people to do...and this is what came of it :)
Date: 8/4/2017 2:56:00 PM
your senses come alive through this piece.. i sigh, ohh heidi.. huggs
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Heidi Sands
Date: 8/4/2017 3:33:00 PM
Thank you nette :)
Date: 8/4/2017 2:52:00 PM
A serenity in this poem makes it poignant...good luck in the contest...funny, I posted a poem about the first kiss...
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Heidi Sands
Date: 8/4/2017 3:33:00 PM
Thank you Frederic. Oh wow, that's interesting. I will have to see if I saw your first kiss poem. I have seen a lot of yours. :)
Date: 8/4/2017 12:53:00 PM
Excellent Heidi, good luck :)
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Heidi Sands
Date: 8/4/2017 1:38:00 PM
Thank you so much Gary :)
Date: 8/4/2017 12:37:00 PM
You gave life to that portrait. I saw the picture, did't quite know where to begin. Well done!
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Heidi Sands
Date: 8/4/2017 12:46:00 PM
Thank you Very much Vijay :)
Date: 8/4/2017 12:36:00 PM
Very lovely Heidi. Good luck in the contest.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 8/4/2017 12:45:00 PM
Thank you Tim! :)

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