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One Last Gift

What good comes of death? The loss, that empty void The tears and sound of silence The helpless guilt, the what ifs And yes, I know, the memories So bittersweet and loved So poignant and cherished Still, that empty void My precious love, my Monte A golden boy, my pup Gave many gifts to me His very presence filled my life One last gift he was to share Upon his passing swift It seems coincidence or not? Another pup had passed just then A high school best whose friendship I’d lost years ago A falling out, a rift never mended Another void So when I learned of his sad news To reach out , I was moved And from our mutual grief Our friendship was healed What good comes of death? Perhaps not much Yet it seems my Monte gave to me One last gift

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Date: 2/7/2025 11:09:00 AM
Hi Mike, such a gentle loving sad poem which I relate to 100 percent. Our doggies are family members and their passing breaks our heart. I'm so sorry, but glad Monte gave you one last gift. I wrote a long poem About my Labby puppy Coco, she broke my heart also. Hope you are well my friend. Blessings, Jennifer.
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Mike Gentile
Date: 2/7/2025 11:24:00 AM
Thank you Jennifer! I know then, that you understand completely how I feel! Kind words do help and I am grateful for them xxoo
Date: 2/6/2025 12:10:00 PM
Such an expressive, touching poem, Mike. Janice
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Mike Gentile
Date: 2/7/2025 4:33:00 AM
Thank you so much Janice xxoo
Date: 2/5/2025 10:03:00 AM
Death is not final. It gives back another love and so life can continue peacefully, but with memories.
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Mike Gentile
Date: 2/7/2025 4:32:00 AM
Yes, so true, thank you Victor!!
Date: 2/5/2025 4:53:00 AM
Yes, we must reach out while we can, mending fences while we are alive, that we carry in the afterlife, no residue. Powerful and meaningful poem, Mike.
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Mike Gentile
Date: 2/7/2025 4:32:00 AM
Thank you so much Seeker!!! Happy Friday!
Date: 2/5/2025 4:44:00 AM
Hello Mike, this is deeply moving showing grief woven and grace. Yes, loss carves voids, yet somehow, in the ache, connection finds a way. Monte’s last gift wasn’t just love remembered but love rekindled. Life’s mysteries never cease to surprise. Beautifully heartfelt. Winter Blessings, My Friend, Daniel
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Mike Gentile
Date: 2/7/2025 4:31:00 AM
Thank you so much Daniel for your kind words and thoughts!!! Happy Friday!

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