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fell out with my muse formed incompatible views became quite a feud sparks and flashes would not fuse crap poems ~ got egos bruised By David Kavanagh

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Date: 2/9/2021 4:49:00 PM
This gave me a chuckle...well done and congrats on the POTD honors.
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David Kavanagh
Date: 2/9/2021 10:28:00 PM
Thanks you so much Jeanne, for popping by, I’m delighted with the honor of potd cheers David
Date: 2/7/2021 12:51:00 PM
David totting up the title's or awards my mate. Nice i like it
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David Kavanagh
Date: 2/9/2021 9:07:00 AM
Apparently it happens mostly on potd when they can communicate without being blocked,
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Christopher Flaherty
Date: 2/7/2021 1:27:00 PM
Wow David my mate so glad after reading your comment you put me on to what was going on below. You really are in the thick of it people bickering on your page Wowza
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David Kavanagh
Date: 2/7/2021 1:02:00 PM
Honestly Christopher this one started out as something else, my mind or muse as it’s called kept pulling me in a different direction so that’s how this came about, potd was the last thing on my mind, was just glad to finish the poem, but it was received pretty well apart from the row that erupted down below, nothing to do with me just spilled over here, cheers David
Date: 2/5/2021 8:51:00 AM
David, congratulations on having your poem selected as POEM OF THE DAY _Constance
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David Kavanagh
Date: 2/5/2021 8:54:00 AM
Heya Constance, thank you so much, I’m delighted with accolade, cheers David
Date: 2/5/2021 6:29:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD David! Well done!
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Keith Trestrail
Date: 2/7/2021 3:43:00 PM
Thanks for blocking me again. It was all just too creepy.
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Mark Koplin
Date: 2/6/2021 7:20:00 AM
Oh sweetie, I have unblocked you for the day.
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Keith Trestrail
Date: 2/5/2021 6:18:00 PM
The truth is, David, he has Keith Derangement Syndrome. They all do but he’s got it bad.
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David Kavanagh
Date: 2/5/2021 6:49:00 AM
Yeah no worries, I was a bit bemused, but then started laughing at the madness, cheers David
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Mark Koplin
Date: 2/5/2021 6:44:00 AM
Sorry about the banter with Keith, he likes to make digs at Jenna for some reason. Now this morning he is also going after Jan.
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David Kavanagh
Date: 2/5/2021 6:41:00 AM
Thanks Mark, you did like it before the honor, and I appreciate you coming back with congrats, cheers David
Date: 2/5/2021 3:59:00 AM
So cute. I enjoyed. Congrats on POTD. Love it. God bless you with love and prayers, Gina
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David Kavanagh
Date: 2/5/2021 4:28:00 AM
Thank you Regina, Im delighted you enjoyed the poem, and I appreciate your kind words, cheers David
Date: 2/5/2021 2:05:00 AM
Good morning, David. Going about one's business is good advice. You got smiles from your poem, and that's much more worthy of a potd than rancorous rabble rousing.
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Mark Koplin
Date: 2/5/2021 6:47:00 AM
Only Cowards like to pick on women, sorry Jenna that he is going after you again. He suffers greatly from something. It's truly sad.
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David Kavanagh
Date: 2/5/2021 6:47:00 AM
Their really going at it, I’d no idea about any of this, but I still find John watts comment very strange, looks like Tom Cunningham made it for someone else, this is great I’m laughing at all the madness cheers David.
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Jenna Logan
Date: 2/5/2021 6:39:00 AM
It’s another case of Keith showing up under MY comment to spew and rant about whatever is bugging him today. Sorry, David. He can only get to me on a potd.
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Mark Koplin
Date: 2/5/2021 6:15:00 AM
Keith likes putting tinfoil and duct tape on his head, it helps keep the government from controlling his mind. He must be fresh out of tape.
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David Kavanagh
Date: 2/5/2021 6:10:00 AM
I must have took the wrong pills today these comments, are very strange even John watts comment below has mysteriously changed and my name is now Robert,
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David Kavanagh
Date: 2/5/2021 5:58:00 AM
Heya all, what the hell is going on here another cameo performance, Jan will not be happy at been upstaged, cheers David
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Keith Trestrail
Date: 2/5/2021 5:35:00 AM
Case in point. Anyone got any duct tape?
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Mark Koplin
Date: 2/5/2021 5:14:00 AM
Oh sweetie you look just like a cute little kernel of corn in the bowl.
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Mark Koplin
Date: 2/5/2021 5:07:00 AM
Oh sweetie, I see you've got your big boy pants on again. Good for you!
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Keith Trestrail
Date: 2/5/2021 4:51:00 AM
I agree. Rabble rousing is so unedifying.
Date: 2/4/2021 4:29:00 PM
Incompatible views, feuds, crap poems, bruised egos...hmm, just another day on the Soup lol. Congrats on POTD.
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Keith Trestrail
Date: 2/7/2021 3:45:00 PM
I'm so excited!
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Mark Koplin
Date: 2/6/2021 7:21:00 AM
You are unblocked sweetie!
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Keith Trestrail
Date: 2/5/2021 7:35:00 PM
You need a map and a moral compass, Griff. The road to Damascus is in the other direction.
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Mark Koplin
Date: 2/5/2021 6:15:00 PM
Oh sweetie you’re deflecting
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Keith Trestrail
Date: 2/5/2021 3:52:00 PM
Some Christian you are. You sermonise like you’re some sort of apostle in your posts to your loyal audience of three but it’s all snake oil. And God sees that. Try practicing what you preach and not who and what you really are. We’re all sinners and will be judged one day. You might want to remember that.
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Mark Koplin
Date: 2/5/2021 7:26:00 AM
It's real simple cupcake, if you stop attacking my country and the women here on the soup you wont ever hear a peep out of me again.
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Mark Koplin
Date: 2/5/2021 7:24:00 AM
Oh sweetie, you continue to tug at my heart strings. I love it when you use your big boy words.
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Keith Trestrail
Date: 2/5/2021 6:26:00 AM
Please, enough with your homoerotic fantasies. You’re not exactly the Lex Luther of riveting banter. You have me blocked yet you continue to seek me out. Why? No one cares about your unhealthy petty obsession with me. I certainly don’t. Now why don’t you fade off into the sunset. I’m off to bed.
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Mark Koplin
Date: 2/5/2021 6:17:00 AM
you're so sweet
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Keith Trestrail
Date: 2/5/2021 5:47:00 AM
Hey Griff. Do Stewie and Brian help you with your rapier sharp comments? Actually it sounds more like something Chris would say.
Date: 2/4/2021 2:48:00 PM
Very romantic senyru Robert, congratulations on POTD, enjoy the honour. Tom.
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David Kavanagh
Date: 2/4/2021 2:53:00 PM
Thank you John, indeed it can be very painful when buttons refuse to be pressed, stubborn muses me accuses, cheers David
Date: 2/4/2021 2:00:00 PM
Congratulations David on POTD with your fun write! Have a blessed evening( - : Jacob
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David Kavanagh
Date: 2/4/2021 2:56:00 PM
Thank you brother for the visit, always appreciated, your right it was fun, a little painful but fun, cheers David
Date: 2/4/2021 11:33:00 AM
Congratulations on POTD David with your clever poem!
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David Kavanagh
Date: 2/4/2021 11:36:00 AM
Thank you Tania for popping in, I’m delighted it turned out a POTD, cheers David
Date: 2/4/2021 11:07:00 AM
Congratulations on your Potd win. So Cute. I love to make people smile/laugh. Enjoy your win/day with blessings.................
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David Kavanagh
Date: 2/4/2021 11:16:00 AM
Honestly Paula was the last thing on my mind to get a POTD, I do be so delighted to get some smiles from a poem, cheers David
Date: 2/4/2021 10:41:00 AM
Without muse crap only. I agree. Congratulations on your Potd. Enjoy the honour friend. Take care Rama
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David Kavanagh
Date: 2/4/2021 10:56:00 AM
No muse no fuse Rama, I’m delighted with the honor, totally unexpected, thank you so much for comments, cheers David
Date: 2/4/2021 10:30:00 AM
Very clever and lots of fun David! Nice rhymes. Very frustrating when we are at odds with our muse! Congrats and high fives on your POTD. :s
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David Kavanagh
Date: 2/4/2021 10:52:00 AM
Thanks Sam I’m delighted it came together, started out as a senryu but damn thing would not work, so them extra 2 lines fitted in great for the tanka, cheers David
Date: 2/4/2021 10:26:00 AM
How odd my original comment disappeared but its been happening a lot recently so I think its just a glitch:-( many congrats on POTD David , I just try to have fun on the site and make folk smile ... as for crap poems I have a huge catalogue of them lol but i do write the occasional serious one too:-) hugs Jan xx
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David Kavanagh
Date: 2/4/2021 10:48:00 AM
If only life was one big joke, most of my stuff is irreverence based, but like yourself I do try put some meaningful serious ones in, but I take myself with a pinch of salt, hopefully your comment will stick around this time, that damn poltergeist dwells in the soup, cheers David
Date: 2/4/2021 9:59:00 AM
Great tanks, David! Congratulations on potd... :)
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David Kavanagh
Date: 2/4/2021 10:41:00 AM
Thank you Akkina for looking in, I’m delighted with the response and comments, cheers David
Date: 2/4/2021 9:17:00 AM
Whatever makes you smile, for a while. :) One person's trash is someone else's treasure. Like A "Crap Poem" Congratulations David, on Poem of the Day. :) Brandy
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David Kavanagh
Date: 2/4/2021 9:44:00 AM
So true Brandy, some of my worse crap poems, actually got some likes, and others I loved, totally overlooked, thank you for congratulations, cheers David
Date: 2/4/2021 7:41:00 AM
Thrilled to see your talent highlighted in a POTD, congratulations dear poet! Have a fabulous day! xomo
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David Kavanagh
Date: 2/4/2021 8:32:00 AM
Thank you super Mo, high praise coming from the maestro on the soup, I’m delighted to get the accolade, hope you are keeping well I honestly do, cheers David
Date: 2/4/2021 7:00:00 AM
Congratulations for POTD. I can understand what it is like missing the muse :)
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David Kavanagh
Date: 2/4/2021 7:18:00 AM
Thank you Heidi, luckily most of the time it’s transient, usually I try a different form, to re engage with the muse, cheers David
Date: 2/4/2021 6:58:00 AM
...and those little pieces of corn that show up in those "crap" poems.....
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David Kavanagh
Date: 2/4/2021 7:13:00 AM
Ha All sorts of things John, from corn to thorns, cheers David
Date: 2/4/2021 5:51:00 AM
Hi David, I can most definitely relate; my muse takes frequent vacations. I enjoyed the read. Congratulations on getting the poem of the day. Have a great day:-) Alexis
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David Kavanagh
Date: 2/4/2021 6:00:00 AM
Thank you Alexis, I was having a bad day, so decided to slate off my lazy muse, and hey presto this one pops out, cheers David
Date: 2/4/2021 5:46:00 AM
Wow! Superb tanka! Congrats on POTD
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David Kavanagh
Date: 2/4/2021 5:49:00 AM
Thank you so much seeker, I’m delighted it went down so well, cheers David
Date: 2/4/2021 2:04:00 AM
- Congratulations on your great p.o.t.d., David :) - // Anne-Lise :)
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David Kavanagh
Date: 2/4/2021 2:32:00 AM
Thank you Anne-Lise, I’m delighted with the honor, cheers David
Date: 2/4/2021 1:52:00 AM
I feel a group hug is in order after our bantering. Tanka away, David, and congratulations on your potd.
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Jenna Logan
Date: 2/4/2021 6:28:00 AM
Busted again
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 2/4/2021 4:22:00 AM
hmmm...
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David Kavanagh
Date: 2/4/2021 3:59:00 AM
Best keep a low profile, til she lets off some steam cheers David
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Jenna Logan
Date: 2/4/2021 2:48:00 AM
Oh I know who, and I'm sure she'll be around to give you a piece of her mind soon. ;)
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David Kavanagh
Date: 2/4/2021 2:30:00 AM
Yes indeed group hug Jenna, the banter was better than the poem until you know who, got involved with her toilet humor disgraceful, ah no seriously was a great laugh, cheers David
Date: 2/4/2021 12:51:00 AM
We all have those bust ups from time to time but lovely when you kiss and make up lol Congratulations David on POTD, enjoy the honour. Tom
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David Kavanagh
Date: 2/4/2021 2:26:00 AM
Kiss and make up, I like that Tom, more like get your act together Mr muse, thanks so much for the comment and news, I shall get myself or my stubborn muse a latte to celebrate, cheers David
Date: 2/2/2021 7:47:00 PM
Happens from time to time! Nicely said!
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David Kavanagh
Date: 2/2/2021 8:58:00 PM
Indeed it does Kim, for some reason if struggling with block, the tanka is my default go to poem, cheers David
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