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One Hit Wonder

The pressure you bear glares at me through the man-made smoke screen that forms the barrier between you and your diminutive audience. It’s years since nineteen fifty-nine, yet today you can still find a niche somewhere just to render your immense hit of yesteryear. born to be a star in the glare of the spotlight which way the signpost As I look at your inclining stance against the microphone stand, emancipation within my mind takes place, instantly focusing on a different era seeing you as you were those years ago. Full length life size guru on my bedroom wall, the pastel rose petalled wallpaper in stark contrast to your black leather gear and shining greased hair, an air of manly pose, yet a portrait of candid innocents. flexible music moves on with change a wild child how could one forget Reality surges back as your voice begins to drift into obnoxiousness, eyes, that begin to spotlight your habitual life of living the fast lane, each note promising nothing, each breath giving no perception of negative opinions, only the sentimentality of the loyal few are perceived. Oh! What price is fame, pressurized to reproduce instantly each session failure contributing to your dilemma driving you deeper, into this abyss of shame! dream on each release everyday a symphony truth a bitter pill © Harry J Horsman 2020

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Date: 11/20/2020 5:23:00 AM
So sad the extreme life of entertainment! Love how you see her at her prime in your mind’s eye.
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Date: 11/18/2020 9:43:00 AM
Don't think I ever tried this form. something to think about. the elusive fame can either rock you in or out, tis true. well done piece, sir Harry.
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Date: 11/11/2020 3:57:00 PM
The faster the rise, (too often) the faster the demise! Love the passion in this one, Harry. Take care, Gershon
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Date: 11/9/2020 3:56:00 AM
Yes, most of the time when we look truth right in the eye it is not a pleasant sight. I enjoyed reading your work. I have no idea what star of whom you are speaking but I think stardom takes a toll on most of those that reach that platform. Thanks for stopping by my page. November in the south can be pleasant or too warm or have a freezing spell. For a number of years now we have weather down into the 20 degrees F. around the middle of November. Sara
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Date: 11/7/2020 9:07:00 AM
Unfortunately fame goes to their heads, any star, be it of movies, films, sport and so on, and they think they are untouchable and live for today not thinking of tomorrow. As for the one hit wonders, like Nancy Sinatra, they fade as suddenly as the started! Great write my friend. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 11/6/2020 6:33:00 PM
The Price of being a Rock Star not worth it in the end. So true in your piece Harry...
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Date: 11/3/2020 6:44:00 PM
Such a great write on the one hit wonders of yesterday. I dabbled a little bit in the biz years ago and I am somewhat dazed on how the music industry has changed so much :)
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Date: 11/3/2020 1:35:00 PM
wow, such poignancy you write with here. Who is it?? soupie me!!
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Date: 11/3/2020 12:20:00 PM
love this thoughtful write, my friend
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Date: 11/3/2020 3:36:00 AM
- A nice mix of different feelings ... the truth does not have to be a bitter pill, Harry :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/3/2020 3:21:00 AM
This is a wonderful haibun... Prose and haiku are very good.. There have been so many one hit wonders...
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Date: 11/3/2020 2:39:00 AM
I am not much in haibuns, but you did wonders with this one. ~~
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Date: 11/2/2020 10:51:00 AM
Oh, I remember many one-hit wonders. Can't imagine how hard some struggle to keep their fans excited. Don McLean had a few minor successes after "American Pie," but that's the only song by which he's known. Excellent writing on a unique and clever approach to the contest. Best wishes for a big win, Harry! Hugs, Carolyn
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Date: 11/2/2020 9:27:00 AM
Wonderfully illustrated plight of one hit wonder. Superb, Haibun, Harry.
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Date: 11/2/2020 8:35:00 AM
Your beautiful pen spills with bittersweet ink in this captivating haibun, Harry. The haiku are exquisite with imagery and punctuate the prose perfectly. Reverie mingled with both pleasure and pain and your last haiku is very impactful. Love this, my friend. Warmest wishes.. ~ Susan
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Date: 11/2/2020 8:09:00 AM
Enjoyed reading, but trying to figure out who you were talking about. A few greasy hair male singers.
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