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— the pull between us,
              a magnetic force
                         defying all control —
 
                                    . . . and i know . . .
 
                                                within this deep gaze,
                                as silence holds your breath close to mine
 
                                          — our connection intensifies
                                                    and love is one heartbeat,
 
                                                                           mirrored in our eyes.

 

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~  my forever is in your eyes, 
            the next beat of your heart ~

Saturday May 9th, 2026- Poem of the Day

one heartbeat

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— the pull between us,
              a magnetic force
                         defying all control —
 
                                    . . . and i know . . .
 
                                                within this deep gaze,
                                as silence holds your breath close to mine
 
                                          — our connection intensifies
                                                    and love is one heartbeat,
 
                                                                           mirrored in our eyes.

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~  my forever is in your eyes, 
            the next beat of your heart ~

Saturday May 9th, 2026- Poem of the Day

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Bj Legros Kelley October 4, 2026 at 4:24 PM Wow, breathtaking, lovely true love written in your sweet poem!

Dorothy Gibbons June 26, 2026 at 9:24 AM Loved this Brandy too late to say congratulations :) but was a great POTD You write with deep love, devotion affectionately. I got inspired reading this loved " love is one heartbeat " " mirrored in our eyes" breathtaking hugs happy creating <3 Brandy Nicole July 10, 2026 at 9:28 AM Dearest Dorothy, I guess we're both a little late, because here I am saying thank you after some time has passed. : ) It's okay. I appreciate you saying these words inspired you. Such a wonderful compliment. Thank you for the belated congratulations and for all your kind words. My best to you. : ) Hugs, Brandy

Mike Bayles June 14, 2026 at 7:23 AM Wonderful Belated congratulations on POTD. Brandy Nicole June 14, 2026 at 3:09 PM Thank you Mike, for the lovely comment and congratulations. Your kind words bring a smile and are appreciated. : ) Hugs, Brandy

Joanna Daniel June 13, 2026 at 5:28 AM Very beautiful:) Brandy Nicole June 14, 2026 at 3:08 PM Thank you, Joanna. I appreciate you and your kind words. : ) Hugs, Brandy

Victor Buhagiar June 10, 2026 at 3:14 AM Your poems are always romantic. Brandy Nicole June 10, 2026 at 8:03 PM Awe, thank you Victor. : ) So sweet of you to say. My best to you. : ) Hugs, Brandy

JC Brul June 6, 2026 at 3:52 AM Congratulations dear Brandy. This poem is unforgettable! ^____^ Brandy Nicole June 10, 2026 at 8:03 PM Unforgettable. : ) The best compliment, ever. So kind of you to say, JCB. Thank you for the congratulations as well. : ) Hugs, Brandy

Andrea Dietrich June 4, 2026 at 11:51 PM So beautiful. It relates a little bit to the recent poem I wrote. We are on same wavelength! Omg. Another POTD? Just noticed that below my comment. Congrats! Brandy Nicole June 5, 2026 at 7:33 PM Smiling. I noticed this after I replied to your Poem of the Day. Our thoughts lingered on the same thing. Thank you Andrea, for your lovely comment and congratulations. Hugs and blessings. : ) Brandy

Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh June 3, 2026 at 10:40 PM Very nicely penned.Congrats on POTD. Brandy Nicole June 5, 2026 at 7:20 PM Thank you, AKham. Your lovely comment and congratulations bring a smile. : ) Brandy

Sara Kendrick June 3, 2026 at 5:10 AM A belated congratulations to you on being POTD on soup. I am sorry that I missed it but how awesome to read such a romantic one this early in the morning. Sara K. Brandy Nicole June 5, 2026 at 7:15 PM Dearest Sara, I'm so happy that you found this poem of mine and placed your kind words upon it. So sweet of you to say it's romantic. When eyes connect in this way, it's truly a breathtaking moment, indeed. Thank you for the congratulations. My best to you. : ) Hugs, Brandy

Deb M May 28, 2026 at 5:58 AM A soft Brandy breeze of romance and loveliness blew straight to the POTD podium!! Belated Congratulations on this beautiful warm write! Debx Brandy Nicole May 28, 2026 at 6:13 PM Your kindness doesn't go unnoticed, Deb. : ) I'm smiling with this thought, and it's such a sweet thing to say. ' A soft Brandy breeze of romance and loveliness. ' Thank you for this compliment, and for the lovely comment with congratulations. My best to you, my dear friend. : ) Hugs, Brandy

Judy Ball May 24, 2026 at 11:25 AM Beautiful Brandy and love the pic. Congrats on POTD. Well deserved. God Bless, JB Brandy Nicole May 26, 2026 at 7:47 PM So kind of you to say. Thank you Judy, for your lovely comment and congratulations. Many wonderful blessings to you. : ) Hugs, Brandy

Paige Hind May 16, 2026 at 7:12 PM congrats belated I know!! happy POTD <3 Brandy Nicole May 17, 2026 at 4:14 PM You're so sweet, Paige. Thank you for the congratulations and for being kind. : ) Hugs, Brandy

Kim Rodrigues May 16, 2026 at 7:37 AM Congrats on POTD! Brandy Nicole May 17, 2026 at 4:13 PM Thank you, Kim. Hugs and blessings to you. : ) Brandy

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri May 15, 2026 at 12:53 PM I remembered to chk out POTDs honored poems today and wow this is a gorgeous one that got that recognition. Kudos! Brandy Nicole May 17, 2026 at 4:12 PM So kind of you to look back and find this poem. : ) Your thoughts are greatly appreciated, S. Zaynab. Many wonderful blessings to you. : ) Hugs, Brandy

Valsa George May 15, 2026 at 6:04 AM Hi dear Brandy, this is very passionate. The intensity of the love is mirrored in the eyes..... Indeed 'a magnetic pull defying all control'. Belated Congratulations on your outstanding poem honored as Poem of the Day. I missed many poems as I had a hectic time in the home front. Brandy Nicole May 17, 2026 at 3:48 PM Dear Valsa, there is passion in a moment such as this, because the depth of love is the only echo that both hearts need; to become one. It is found in the eyes as they connect. Your thoughts are beautiful and they bring a smile. Thank you for this lovely comment and congratulations. I completely understand my sweet friend, and I'm Keeping you in my thoughts. Hugs and blessings. : ) Brandy

Jennifer Proxenos May 13, 2026 at 11:05 AM Hi Brandy, this is an outstanding write and I am so proud that you got POTD for it, i have never read anything quite as intense or beautiful and absolutely true, Congratulations , your poetry will be read into the far distant future. Love and hugs, Jennifer. Brandy Nicole May 15, 2026 at 7:39 PM Dear Jennifer, such a sweet thing to say. You're kindness means so much to me and I appreciate the compliment. I must say, your thoughts leave me in complete awe. Thank you for this lovely and inspiring comment, and for the congratulations as well. Hugs and blessings to you. : ) Brandy

Daniel Henry Rodgers May 13, 2026 at 8:28 AM Dear Brandy, Congratulations on a beautiful POTD where everything narrows to that shared gaze and the space between two breaths. I like how the lines drift downward, almost like the moment is slowing itself so the connection can settle in. The final image—love held as a single heartbeat between two people is simple, steady and beautiful. So tender. Blessings, Dear Brandy, Daniel Brandy Nicole May 15, 2026 at 7:24 PM Dear Daniel, you notice the way these words sway, and you're right, it enhances the beautiful connection within. When two hearts melt into each other and become one, the connection is beyond breathtaking. A beautiful moment shared on this day, and I'm floating in the depth of this forever love. Your thoughts are so soft and poetic, as you always see the beauty and depth that my words hold. Thank you for this wonderful comment and the congratulations. My best to you, my sweet friend. Hugs and blessings. : ) Brandy

Abdullah Alhemaidy May 11, 2026 at 5:18 AM Very lovely! Pure romance read :-) Belated congratulations on your so lovely POTD! Hugs AA Brandy Nicole May 15, 2026 at 6:42 PM You're so kind, AA. Thank you for this lovely comment and congratulations. Many wonderful blessings to you. : ) Hugs, Brandy

Charles Messina May 11, 2026 at 4:07 AM Your writing is beautiful, Brandy. You always pour your heart into your poetry...lovely! Belated Congratulations on your POTD! Hugs Charlie Brandy Nicole May 12, 2026 at 7:05 PM I'm in complete awe with you saying this, because my heart, the deep emotions within; truly linger upon the page. Thank you Charlie, for this beautiful comment, and for the belated congratulations. : ) Hugs, Brandy

Bj Legros Kelley May 10, 2026 at 8:05 AM A very beautiful love poem Brandy, congratulations on your POTD honor! Brandy Nicole May 12, 2026 at 6:31 PM You are so kind. Thank you so much, Bj. Many wonderful blessings to you. : ) Hugs, Brandy

Gershon Wolf May 9, 2026 at 7:52 PM 'and love is one heartbeat mirrored in our eyes.' ~ Elegant and certainly potd-worthy, Brandy. Congratulations ~ gw Brandy Nicole May 12, 2026 at 6:24 PM Elegant.. such a beautiful way to describe this thought within. Casual, yet soft and dreamy. Thank you Gershon, for your lovely comment and congratulations. : ) Hugs, Brandy

Anne Winter May 9, 2026 at 7:47 PM Dearest Brandy, what a beautiful writing! I love the way you write about love and romance with such softness that soothes the heart deeply. Congratulations on POTD! Well deserved! Love, Anne

I Am Anaya May 9, 2026 at 2:15 PM Your charms warms my soul, I know there is magic just like this. Congratulations on your POTD Brandy! Graceful pleasures makes treaures. May blessings Brandy Nicole May 10, 2026 at 6:33 PM Dear Anaya, now you warm my soul with this thought. I'm just a woman writing about love, and how it is overflowing from within. Your comment is so soft and poetic. Thank you so much, my sweet friend. I appreciate the congratulations as well. Many wonderful blessings to you. : ) Hugs, Brandy

Constance La France May 9, 2026 at 12:15 PM Brandy, so beautifully penned and I love your layout, very creative, and congratulation on receiving POTD, a FAV ~ Brandy Nicole May 10, 2026 at 6:17 PM Dear Constance, I appreciate you sharing with me how much you enjoy the layout of this poem. So kind of you to say it's also creative. Thank you for the congratulations as well, and for placing it in your favorites. Hugs and blessings to you. : ) Brandy

Unseeking Seeker May 9, 2026 at 9:21 AM Wow! Too good! Congratulations on POTD, Brandy. Brandy Nicole May 9, 2026 at 5:58 PM Smiling. For you to say this is ' too good, ' well that's the best compliment, indeed. Thank you, Unseeking Seeker. : ) Hugs, Brandy

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