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One Hard Word

We don't want our love ones to hue and cry Thus, Everytime we contrive to survive From the inside out, We must give the eye Because... one hard word to say is goodbye olive_eloi 2:15 AM 04/05/2014

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Teddy Kimathi

Date: 8/30/2014 7:29:00 AM

True, saying goodbye tastes like bile in our hearts. Congrats for your win Olive! ^_^

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/29/2014 10:07:00 AM

Olive, Thank You For replying to my comment :) LINDA

D.W. Rodgers

Date: 8/28/2014 9:36:00 AM

Nice and so true, especially when they are young. Congrats on your win.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 8/30/2014 8:43:00 AM

Thanks much ..:) GBU

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 8/28/2014 9:22:00 AM

Wow Olive great write! Yes so true that it's tough to say goodbye , congrats on huge win dear!

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 8/30/2014 7:45:00 AM

Thanks much dr. Upma for the continuous support..:)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/27/2014 6:27:00 PM

Olive, it's great seeing a poem of yours. It's been a while!! Congrats for this win, sweetie.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 8/30/2014 7:44:00 AM

Thanks much Andie..:) yes been busy that I didn't have time to write much..:) hope you are ok

Paul Callus

Date: 8/27/2014 3:01:00 PM

Goodbyes are always hard to say, but hopefully people will be able to meet again..... Congrats on your win Olive_eloi:) Lovely to know you're back home!! hugs // paul

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 8/30/2014 7:42:00 AM

Thanks much Paul..:) I appreciate it..:) yes that hope of that we can meet again..:)

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 8/27/2014 5:53:00 AM

A truth well told, Olive. congrats

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 8/28/2014 5:42:00 AM

Thanks much Dr. ram. :)

Jan Allison

Date: 8/27/2014 5:00:00 AM

Many Congrats Olive I can relate to this so much I hate goodbyes:-( Hugs Jan xxx

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 8/28/2014 5:40:00 AM

Thanks much Jan..:) hugs too..:)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/26/2014 9:49:00 PM

Olive :) Congratulations! Thank you for supporting my under 5 lines or less contest. Enjoy my blog "One Hard Word" when and if you have time. Always ~ LINDA ~

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 8/28/2014 5:40:00 AM

Thanks for the placement Lollie Linda..:)

Paul Callus

Date: 4/5/2014 3:41:00 PM

Good evening dear Olive_eloi. :) Just found your new 'creation'. well written quatrain with catchy rhyme. When it's time to say goodbye we try to be brave and hide what feelings there are within. It does not pay to make it any harder than it already is!! be seeing you :) // paul

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 8/1/2014 6:00:00 PM

Thanks you so much Paul for reading this before.. :) weee I forgot to comment.. :D