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One Hard Word

We don't want our love ones to hue and cry
Thus, Everytime we contrive to survive
From the inside out, We must give the eye
Because... one hard word to say is goodbye

olive_eloi
2:15 AM
04/05/2014

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Teddy Kimathi

August 30, 2014 at 7:29 AM

True, saying goodbye tastes like bile in our hearts. Congrats for your win Olive! ^_^

Poet Destroyer A

August 29, 2014 at 10:07 AM

Olive, Thank You For replying to my comment :) LINDA

D.W. Rodgers

August 28, 2014 at 9:36 AM

Nice and so true, especially when they are young. Congrats on your win.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

August 30, 2014 at 8:43 AM

Thanks much ..:) GBU

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

August 28, 2014 at 9:22 AM

Wow Olive great write! Yes so true that it's tough to say goodbye , congrats on huge win dear!

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

August 30, 2014 at 7:45 AM

Thanks much dr. Upma for the continuous support..:)

Andrea Dietrich

August 27, 2014 at 6:27 PM

Olive, it's great seeing a poem of yours. It's been a while!! Congrats for this win, sweetie.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

August 30, 2014 at 7:44 AM

Thanks much Andie..:) yes been busy that I didn't have time to write much..:) hope you are ok

Paul Callus

August 27, 2014 at 3:01 PM

Goodbyes are always hard to say, but hopefully people will be able to meet again..... Congrats on your win Olive_eloi:) Lovely to know you're back home!! hugs // paul

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

August 30, 2014 at 7:42 AM

Thanks much Paul..:) I appreciate it..:) yes that hope of that we can meet again..:)

Dr.Ram Mehta

August 27, 2014 at 5:53 AM

A truth well told, Olive. congrats

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

August 28, 2014 at 5:42 AM

Thanks much Dr. ram. :)

Jan Allison

August 27, 2014 at 5:00 AM

Many Congrats Olive I can relate to this so much I hate goodbyes:-( Hugs Jan xxx

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

August 28, 2014 at 5:40 AM

Thanks much Jan..:) hugs too..:)

Poet Destroyer A

August 26, 2014 at 9:49 PM

Olive :) Congratulations! Thank you for supporting my under 5 lines or less contest. Enjoy my blog "One Hard Word" when and if you have time. Always ~ LINDA ~

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

August 28, 2014 at 5:40 AM

Thanks for the placement Lollie Linda..:)

Paul Callus

April 5, 2014 at 3:41 PM

Good evening dear Olive_eloi. :) Just found your new 'creation'. well written quatrain with catchy rhyme. When it's time to say goodbye we try to be brave and hide what feelings there are within. It does not pay to make it any harder than it already is!! be seeing you :) // paul

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

August 1, 2014 at 6:00 PM

Thanks you so much Paul for reading this before.. :) weee I forgot to comment.. :D