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One Haiku

winding brambles spread spiders inside spinning webs ~ dare a creeper tread ~ ONE HAIKU Poetry Contest Syllable counter PS 5/7/5 Sponsored by: Line Gauthier 19/04/2021

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Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 4/23/2021 8:19:00 AM

ooh, I like it! a creepy crawly ku ~x

David Kavanagh
Date: 4/23/2021 8:42:00 AM

Why thank you, super Mo, not putting my hand in there, mightn’t get it back, cheers David

Sotto Poet

Date: 4/19/2021 2:16:00 PM

This delightful Haiku speaks for itself; I hope it will be the top winner, good luck in the contest David, have a good evening

David Kavanagh
Date: 4/19/2021 2:21:00 PM

Hello Lasaad, I’m not sure if a rhyming haiku is Ideal for the contest, I’d be delighted as always with a placement, as indeed I am for your positive comment, cheers David

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 4/19/2021 12:15:00 PM

Hello David Kavanagh, it looks like a winner to me. Enjoy your day my friend.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 4/19/2021 4:14:00 PM

Jello David Kavanagh, yes i enjoyed your poem. It looks like a winner to me David. Cheers. Darlene

David Kavanagh
Date: 4/19/2021 1:24:00 PM

Heya Darlene, a placement would be great, I’m delighted you enjoyed this one, cheers David

L Milton Hankins

Date: 4/19/2021 10:21:00 AM

Oh, I think this is a really good one, David. Best wishes for a high placement in the contest. I wish I could write haiku like this!

David Kavanagh
Date: 4/19/2021 11:02:00 AM

Thanks Milton, I changed it about a bit, think I’ll stick with this edition, I think you more than compensate, with the other types of poetry you write, cheers David