Peter Dome Poet Free verse

One Foot In the Bedroom One Foot Out the Door

One foot in the bedroom
one foot out of the door
seems relationships 
are too much hassle today
and no one wants
a loving relationship 
any more.

You give your best
your hopes built up
and then shot down in flames
emotions and feeling
amount to nothing
neither does your name.

I don't want a disposable relationship
I'm nones plaything or toy
I'm me I have a heart brain and personality
but no one wants that or me.

So I remain disillusioned
lost and alone,
as ever.



Peter Some.copyright. 2013. Dec.

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Anne-Lise Andresen December 22, 2013 at 7:15 AM - Well written ..... but sad,Peter !!! :( - I wish you and your loved ones an enjoyable Christmas - All the best for the year 2014 ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :) Peter Dome December 22, 2013 at 7:19 AM Thank you so much Anne Lise but I have no one.Best wishes to you.take care Pete/ Peter Dome December 22, 2013 at 7:16 AM Thank you Linda. not sure about two to ruin a relationship. never get to that stage,I'm not a piece of meat for anyone..I need more for keeps, take care. best wishes Pete..

Linda Jackson December 22, 2013 at 6:49 AM A sad poem about doomed relationships. Well written. We are only human, Peter, so it takes two to ruin a romance. Best wishes Linda x

Shadow Hamilton December 21, 2013 at 3:27 PM deep and sad too Peter truth as well powerful pen Shadow x smile hug Peter Dome December 21, 2013 at 4:32 PM Thank you dear Lady. Call me an old fashioned a cursed romantic, doesn't seem to count much these days. Take good care. warm best wishes. Pete.