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One Fine Night

"one fine night" do you remember the night that one fine night starting as a three hour tour lasting endlessly witnessing the sun then the moon and sun once more never expecting our happy place to reveal her all mesmerized by sights and sounds as the sky changed clueless of the clock telling us lights out last call encaged were we by protection of the oceanfront world nothing planned we embraced the surprise without a care some would have taken opportunity to endulge pleasure others would have looked for ways out to go back home on golden sands we sat hearing tides seeing reflections savoring such a moment entrusted beyond any act of love do you remember that one fine night beneath radiant stars witnessing the heavens of our happy place reveal her all SkyWatcher 03-04-23

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Date: 3/5/2023 11:00:00 AM
Very engaging poetry, Lisa. Romance and Love are timeless and ask only for acceptance. They give us such beautiful memories. Your poem was fluid, it rolled along like the oean waves. Thank you for sharing to beauty you've seen and experienced my sweet friend. Smiles ~ Blessings Bill
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Lisa Ricci
Date: 3/7/2023 7:38:00 AM
Good Morning Bill. It is I who thanks you. Please excuse this short response and reply.
Date: 3/5/2023 6:45:00 AM
- Sounds like a beautiful memory, Lisa - You describe it wonderfully - hugs
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Lisa Ricci
Date: 3/7/2023 7:37:00 AM
Good Morning Anne. Thank you very much. Please excuse this short response and reply.
Date: 3/5/2023 1:18:00 AM
It only takes one night, LR! :o]
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Lisa Ricci
Date: 3/7/2023 7:36:00 AM
Hello Arlo. Thank you very much. Please excuse this short response and reply.
Date: 3/4/2023 10:01:00 AM
Such happy memories. Grat imagery.
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Lisa Ricci
Date: 3/7/2023 7:35:00 AM
Many thank yous Victor. Please excuse this short response and reply.

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