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Reach to go the extra long mile. It takes so much effort with trials. On some days Satan tries to beguile Quick! simplify your class. As aging problems increase pains. Going the extra mile remains Causing friction once more again Complaints_ those spats amass. As the end of life here, slows down. Live life's joy, wear the old age's crown. Everyday move forward, don't drown. Extra miles_ pearls not glass!

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Date: 8/30/2023 9:02:00 PM
Lovely, Sara. Pic included. Congratulations on your win and I love your old age crown. I've started walking with my signature walking stick. It was the trunk of a baby redbud tree that didn't make it in our slate fields.
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 8/31/2023 1:21:00 PM
Sorry to hear that your redbud tree did not make it, I bought one several years ago and it is not looking well for some reason. Good that you were able to turn it into something very useful and with each step you have a memory of the redbud when it was alive and well. Thanks for dropping by my page with congratulations. Sara
Date: 8/30/2023 2:21:00 PM
An inspirational write, Sara! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 8/31/2023 1:17:00 PM
Why, thank you, Kim. Thanks for the visit with congrats. Sara
Date: 8/29/2023 7:18:00 AM
Wonderful poem, Sara! CONGRATS on your win! Janice
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 8/29/2023 2:39:00 PM
I am glad you like it, Janice. Thank you for dropping by with congratulations. Sara
Date: 8/29/2023 6:27:00 AM
"Live life's joy, wear the old age's crown" - Great! Congratulations!
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 8/29/2023 2:39:00 PM
Thank you, Alex, for dropping by with congratulations. Sar
Date: 8/29/2023 5:29:00 AM
Wonderfully written, Sara. This made me smile :) Thank you for that...and Congratulations on your win! Hugs Charlie
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 8/29/2023 2:38:00 PM
Why, thank you, Charles. I appreciate you letting me know it placed. Sara
Date: 8/14/2023 1:44:00 PM
Great poem with inspirational thoughts, Sara. Perfectly penned, Best wishes for the contest
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 8/14/2023 2:12:00 PM
Why, thank you Lasaad. Your visits always add a special touch. Sara
Date: 8/14/2023 1:07:00 PM
Keep your mind active with wonderful poems like this one Sara, and you’ll be wearing that crown for a long time, excellently penned, cheers David
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 8/14/2023 2:04:00 PM
Thank you, David. I need the cheers right about now. Sara
Date: 8/14/2023 12:35:00 PM
A creative/wonderful ~ write/picture. Older people do slow down. Have a great day.............
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 8/14/2023 1:01:00 PM
Why, thank you, Paula. Your visits add so much to my pages. Sara
Date: 8/14/2023 10:22:00 AM
- Walk a bit every day ... no running for me :) - Great written, Sara :) - Luck in the contest :) - hugs
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 8/14/2023 1:01:00 PM
Anne-Lise, Well, I am no longer able to walk like I once did so I don't do much of it anymore. It is good that you can, and keep it. I think keeping as active as possible is a bonus for a healthy life. Your visits always add a different perspective. Sara

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