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One Drop

I am but one drop of water Soaking in the knowledge of the sea Swelling amid things great and small Through the vastness of eternity

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Daver Austin

Date: 9/4/2008 5:08:00 AM

Such a lot said in so few words. I agree.....we are all drops of water, and the all makes the sea and eternity. Congrats on this well thought out piece. Love, Daver

Mohammad Yamin

Date: 9/2/2008 3:47:00 PM

Deborah, your poem One Drop is enchanting. It is also philosophic. Congratulations on its being featured this weak. -Mohammad

Vince Suzadail Jr.

Date: 9/2/2008 7:14:00 AM

Congrats on "One Drop" being featured. Vince

Michael Jordan

Date: 9/1/2008 7:47:00 PM

What a wonderful poem to just be four lines - I love the way it leaves the door open for thought - Congrats on being featured - God Bless

Date: 8/31/2008 9:00:00 PM

So much said in just four lines. This is a thought provoking poem that begs for more than one reading. Congratulations on having it featured. Karen

Sharon Winter

Date: 8/31/2008 6:36:00 PM

This is totally awesome. Congratulations on your excellent poetry being featured this week. Well done. Love, Shar