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One Day's Magic

I will transform the world in need If magic happens in one finger flick Forgetting greed, doing good deeds I will transform the world in need Ending all wars; planting loves' seed Giving cure, healing all that are sick I will transform the world in need If magic happens in one finger flick (c) Olive Eloisa June 29, 2014 1:48pm

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Date: 12/10/2014 12:27:00 PM
If only, it sure would make the World a better place. Some day, one day - James :)
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Date: 12/10/2014 10:43:00 PM
thanks much JAmes.. :)
Date: 7/8/2014 11:56:00 PM
Olive, Congratulations, on your awesome win. Always~ Linda
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Date: 7/6/2014 8:20:00 AM
A wonderful write my friend! Congrats on your win!!
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Date: 7/5/2014 4:23:00 AM
Great thots Olive ! U can really change the world ,, magical words ,, congrats on win!
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Date: 7/6/2014 4:27:00 PM
Thanks Sissy Vie. :) hugs and hugs and I know very well you can too
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Date: 7/6/2014 4:25:00 PM
thanks you Sissy Vie..:) hugs and hugs,,,:)
Date: 6/30/2014 6:11:00 PM
I love your triolet Olive_eloi! Maybe if we were to click our fingers all together the magic you're after will happen! // paul
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Date: 7/4/2014 5:06:00 PM
Congratulations!!!! Happy Friday to you Olive_eloi:)
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Date: 6/30/2014 6:33:00 PM
yES OH yes Paul.. :)!! thanks much.. I am waiting your triolet!!!! make one soon.. :D?!
Date: 6/29/2014 11:19:00 PM
Beautiful and magical sentiments!!! Loved this one!
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Date: 6/30/2014 1:03:00 PM
Thank Buddy Art with poetic .... :D
Date: 6/29/2014 1:44:00 PM
Olive get those fingers clicking because the work magic with words....David
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Date: 6/30/2014 1:02:00 PM
Hahaha ÿes I'll do specially if it will bring goodness..:)!! Thanks..:D
Date: 6/29/2014 1:11:00 PM
This my friend is a true gem. BBBBravoooooo!!!!!!!!
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Date: 6/30/2014 5:05:00 AM
thanks Robert.. :)
Date: 6/29/2014 1:04:00 PM
ABRACADABRA weave your magic Olive - wonderful sentiment. Good luck if its for the contest Hugs as ever Jan xxx
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Date: 6/30/2014 5:01:00 AM
:) thanks Jan.. :)
Date: 6/29/2014 8:06:00 AM
How sweet and noble Olive ...I truly love this...hugs Tim
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Date: 6/29/2014 11:56:00 AM
Thank you Tim.. :D hugs too. :D
Date: 6/29/2014 7:16:00 AM
- I wish it would happen, Olive !!! - Beautiful :) - Good luck in the contest! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 6/29/2014 11:55:00 AM
I too wish Anne.. :) so earth will be a better place to live in.. :)
Date: 6/29/2014 7:11:00 AM
Olive, I hope this one's for the contest, it looks like a winner to me
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 6/29/2014 11:55:00 AM
Thank you Jerry.. :)

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