One Day's Magic

I will transform the world in need If magic happens in one finger flick Forgetting greed, doing good deeds I will transform the world in need Ending all wars; planting loves' seed Giving cure, healing all that are sick I will transform the world in need If magic happens in one finger flick (c) Olive Eloisa June 29, 2014 1:48pm
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Fraser Avatar
December 10, 2014 at 12:27 PM
If only, it sure would make the World a better place. Some day, one day - James :)
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
December 10, 2014 at 10:43 PM
thanks much JAmes.. :)
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July 8, 2014 at 11:56 PM
Olive, Congratulations, on your awesome win. Always~ Linda
Lindley Avatar
July 6, 2014 at 8:20 AM
A wonderful write my friend! Congrats on your win!!
A. Sharma Avatar
July 5, 2014 at 4:23 AM
Great thots Olive ! U can really change the world ,, magical words ,, congrats on win!
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
July 6, 2014 at 4:27 PM
Thanks Sissy Vie. :) hugs and hugs and I know very well you can too
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July 6, 2014 at 4:25 PM
thanks you Sissy Vie..:) hugs and hugs,,,:)
Callus Avatar
June 30, 2014 at 6:11 PM
I love your triolet Olive_eloi! Maybe if we were to click our fingers all together the magic you're after will happen! // paul
Callus Avatar
July 4, 2014 at 5:06 PM
Congratulations!!!! Happy Friday to you Olive_eloi:)
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
June 30, 2014 at 6:33 PM
yES OH yes Paul.. :)!! thanks much.. I am waiting your triolet!!!! make one soon.. :D?!
Vaso Avatar
June 29, 2014 at 11:19 PM
Beautiful and magical sentiments!!! Loved this one!
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
June 30, 2014 at 1:03 PM
Thank Buddy Art with poetic .... :D
Williams Avatar
June 29, 2014 at 1:44 PM
Olive get those fingers clicking because the work magic with words....David
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
June 30, 2014 at 1:02 PM
Hahaha ÿes I'll do specially if it will bring goodness..:)!! Thanks..:D
Lindley Avatar
June 29, 2014 at 1:11 PM
This my friend is a true gem. BBBBravoooooo!!!!!!!!
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
June 30, 2014 at 5:05 AM
thanks Robert.. :)
United Avatar
June 29, 2014 at 1:04 PM
ABRACADABRA weave your magic Olive - wonderful sentiment. Good luck if its for the contest Hugs as ever Jan xxx
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
June 30, 2014 at 5:01 AM
:) thanks Jan.. :)
Smith Avatar
June 29, 2014 at 8:06 AM
How sweet and noble Olive ...I truly love this...hugs Tim
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
June 29, 2014 at 11:56 AM
Thank you Tim.. :D hugs too. :D
Andresen Avatar
June 29, 2014 at 7:16 AM
- I wish it would happen, Olive !!! - Beautiful :) - Good luck in the contest! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
June 29, 2014 at 11:55 AM
I too wish Anne.. :) so earth will be a better place to live in.. :)
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June 29, 2014 at 7:11 AM
Olive, I hope this one's for the contest, it looks like a winner to me
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
June 29, 2014 at 11:55 AM
Thank you Jerry.. :)
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