John Loving Iii Poet Dramatic Verse

One Day One Wish One Poem

Let us escape our space and time
Let mine go forward and yours unwind
And let us meet on even plain
Just for a day each others claim
Before the dawn we both awake
Aware we only have this date
To you I give what I promised death
From earthly being all I have left
The last act of love given this breath
A gift for your existence and poetrys depth




(An invitation for a collaboration with 
Elizabeth Wesley.)

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Phyllis Babcock November 5, 2013 at 10:45 AM Nicely done on this poem. Did not see the other part so will have to look at Lizzie's. love phyl

Len Gasun March 2, 2013 at 8:07 AM A very romantic and lovely poem my dear friend John. thank you so much for sharing and your precious time stopping to read again one of my poems. Have a great day! love/hugs, Leonora

Elizabeth Wesley March 1, 2013 at 7:05 PM Will we be together? When will you post my part, they go together well! :)

Laura Breidenthal February 27, 2013 at 9:31 PM Honestly, I thought this was awesome! You guys collaborate really well. Love the clever rhyming and the message. Always, Laura

Yanny Widjanarko February 27, 2013 at 7:30 PM this is so romantic :D I really enjoyed my read this morning John, wishing you a wonderful day :) - hug, yanny

Charmaine Chircop February 27, 2013 at 11:05 AM Wondetful post john

Eileen Manassian February 27, 2013 at 4:07 AM Wow! How absolutely charming....I was taken in my by it! Thanks for sharing...and thanks for that lovely post on my poem! Yes...to love a woman is an art that Bryan Adams beautifully portrayed in that song! :) I'm A FAN!