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For Seb(ald), because she loves this poem so much :)

One Day I'Ll Join You

In fragile colours you appear to me
Suave pastel strokes that are so slowly
but tenderly washed away from my memory

In gentle lullabies you caress my ears
Warm mumbling in your language
I never was able to master

I want your arms to hold me one more time
Hear your soft smiling whispers
of comfort while you sing for me

Here are the lines we once drew in the sand
There the road of pebbles we created
Our children's voices brutally silenced

At night I look out at the yawning sun
As she draws blood orange hues
And know one day I'll join you

Time deletes you second by word by line
But it can never erase you from my heart
For you are etched in the very core of me
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Vinson Avatar
February 26, 2017 at 10:31 PM
Darren, there are some nicely broad truths here about the human condition. Sometimes we always remember, and sometimes we can't get what is lost. The setting sun and moon always make me a bit sad.
White Avatar
February 27, 2017 at 12:25 AM
Yeah... It's a poem about loss, remembering and nostalgia. So yes...
Herlihy Avatar
February 26, 2017 at 9:07 AM
Some memories are lasting and endure, as evidenced in this beautiful poem. John
White Avatar
February 26, 2017 at 10:43 AM
Some memories indeed are, John, thank you.
Lamoureux Avatar
February 26, 2017 at 8:29 AM
Yep, still wow. Back for another read.
White Avatar
February 26, 2017 at 8:38 AM
You surprise me, I like it :)
Rodrigues Avatar
February 25, 2017 at 3:40 PM
Sad and lovely write! Love top of last verse!
White Avatar
February 26, 2017 at 12:45 AM
That made me smile, Kim. I love that part too :)
Ricci Avatar
February 25, 2017 at 10:11 AM
This entry Darren is a beauty and a gem. Please allow me to let it stand. And yes, this entry must be read out loud with emphasis. I found it timeless with that poetic tone. Well done
White Avatar
February 25, 2017 at 11:36 AM
Lisa, thank you for your kind comments :)
Marcum Wong Avatar
February 25, 2017 at 8:19 AM
This lovely poem is a little masterpiece Darren! Beautifully composed! ; ) 7
White Avatar
February 25, 2017 at 11:33 AM
Connie, thank you so much :)
Marie Avatar
February 24, 2017 at 8:16 PM
This is really really beautiful Darren :-) A romantic piece, exquisitely penned. In matters of the heart, this is one of finest poems I have read. What a treat to read, thank you :-) blessings, lynn
White Avatar
February 24, 2017 at 10:34 PM
Thank you Lynn :)
Pran Avatar
February 24, 2017 at 7:32 PM
Wow! Very lovely lines, :)
White Avatar
February 24, 2017 at 10:32 PM
Thank you, Ali :)
Green Avatar
February 24, 2017 at 3:20 PM
And you call me a romantic poet, this one is pure love and felt so good to read this afternoon. The last two lines...stellar.
White Avatar
February 24, 2017 at 10:32 PM
It is, and it came straight out of my heart Thank you :)
Smith Avatar
February 24, 2017 at 1:25 PM
Simply beautiful...one of your best
White Avatar
February 24, 2017 at 2:19 PM
Thanks Tim :)
Roper Avatar
February 24, 2017 at 10:14 AM
Very profound write, Darren,, past memories never leave our hearts especially if there is love involve... Hugs Eve
White Avatar
February 24, 2017 at 11:48 AM
They will always stay with us.
Lamoureux Avatar
February 24, 2017 at 8:52 AM
Wow, this is hauntingly beautiful!
White Avatar
February 24, 2017 at 8:56 AM
Thank you, Richard :)
B. Avatar
February 24, 2017 at 8:39 AM
Thank god we can hold on tightly within our hearts those whom we loved. Darren this is so touching. Loved this poem :)
White Avatar
February 24, 2017 at 8:45 AM
Thank you, Carol. And yes, I so agree!
Ella Avatar
February 24, 2017 at 8:28 AM
Yes, the heart never forgets <3 Beautiful, especially the last lines.
White Avatar
February 24, 2017 at 8:35 AM
Never indeed, thank you my sweet friend <3
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