One Day I'Ll Join You

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For Seb(ald), because she loves this poem so much :)

In fragile colours you appear to me
Suave pastel strokes that are so slowly
but tenderly washed away from my memory

In gentle lullabies you caress my ears
Warm mumbling in your language
I never was able to master

I want your arms to hold me one more time
Hear your soft smiling whispers
of comfort while you sing for me

Here are the lines we once drew in the sand
There the road of pebbles we created
Our children's voices brutally silenced

At night I look out at the yawning sun
As she draws blood orange hues
And know one day I'll join you

Time deletes you second by word by line
But it can never erase you from my heart
For you are etched in the very core of me

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 2/26/2017 10:31:00 PM
Darren, there are some nicely broad truths here about the human condition. Sometimes we always remember, and sometimes we can't get what is lost. The setting sun and moon always make me a bit sad.
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Darren White
Date: 2/27/2017 12:25:00 AM
Yeah... It's a poem about loss, remembering and nostalgia. So yes...
Date: 2/26/2017 9:07:00 AM
Some memories are lasting and endure, as evidenced in this beautiful poem. John
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Darren White
Date: 2/26/2017 10:43:00 AM
Some memories indeed are, John, thank you.
Date: 2/26/2017 8:29:00 AM
Yep, still wow. Back for another read.
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Darren White
Date: 2/26/2017 8:38:00 AM
You surprise me, I like it :)
Date: 2/25/2017 3:40:00 PM
Sad and lovely write! Love top of last verse!
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Darren White
Date: 2/26/2017 12:45:00 AM
That made me smile, Kim. I love that part too :)
Date: 2/25/2017 10:11:00 AM
This entry Darren is a beauty and a gem. Please allow me to let it stand. And yes, this entry must be read out loud with emphasis. I found it timeless with that poetic tone. Well done
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Darren White
Date: 2/25/2017 11:36:00 AM
Lisa, thank you for your kind comments :)
Date: 2/25/2017 8:19:00 AM
This lovely poem is a little masterpiece Darren! Beautifully composed! ; ) 7
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Darren White
Date: 2/25/2017 11:33:00 AM
Connie, thank you so much :)
Date: 2/24/2017 8:16:00 PM
This is really really beautiful Darren :-) A romantic piece, exquisitely penned. In matters of the heart, this is one of finest poems I have read. What a treat to read, thank you :-) blessings, lynn
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Darren White
Date: 2/24/2017 10:34:00 PM
Thank you Lynn :)
Date: 2/24/2017 7:32:00 PM
Wow! Very lovely lines, :)
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Darren White
Date: 2/24/2017 10:32:00 PM
Thank you, Ali :)
Date: 2/24/2017 3:20:00 PM
And you call me a romantic poet, this one is pure love and felt so good to read this afternoon. The last two lines...stellar.
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Darren White
Date: 2/24/2017 10:32:00 PM
It is, and it came straight out of my heart Thank you :)
Date: 2/24/2017 1:25:00 PM
Simply beautiful...one of your best
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Darren White
Date: 2/24/2017 2:19:00 PM
Thanks Tim :)
Date: 2/24/2017 10:14:00 AM
Very profound write, Darren,, past memories never leave our hearts especially if there is love involve... Hugs Eve
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Darren White
Date: 2/24/2017 11:48:00 AM
They will always stay with us.
Date: 2/24/2017 8:52:00 AM
Wow, this is hauntingly beautiful!
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Darren White
Date: 2/24/2017 8:56:00 AM
Thank you, Richard :)
Date: 2/24/2017 8:39:00 AM
Thank god we can hold on tightly within our hearts those whom we loved. Darren this is so touching. Loved this poem :)
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Darren White
Date: 2/24/2017 8:45:00 AM
Thank you, Carol. And yes, I so agree!
Date: 2/24/2017 8:28:00 AM
Yes, the heart never forgets <3 Beautiful, especially the last lines.
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Darren White
Date: 2/24/2017 8:35:00 AM
Never indeed, thank you my sweet friend <3
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