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One day

One day I opened my eyes, The happiest day for my family but then also I cried. Childhood full of memories and joy, Teenage stressful yet I enjoy, Being mature in my twenties, While taking up responsibilities in my thirties, Managing my family in my forties, While resting in my fifties And knowing the truth of life in my sixties. With this, One day I closed my eyes, The happiest day for me but then also everyone cried.

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Date: 12/30/2024 7:36:00 AM
A very beautiful poem. I join poet Beata Augustin in welcoming you to poetry soup. Wish you a Happy New Year!
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Date: 12/21/2024 4:45:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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