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The inn represents a country
A king viper came to family run inn filled with pride his eyes pierced the soul darkness cold and lonely seeking the warmth within inviting begging dressed in the finest silk tailored to the nines shoes shined with a dazzling smile summoning friendship He had the sweetest manner about him politely waltzing words just drooled from the split pretending to care looking for charity The innkeeper offered him a room gracefully when he had declared his nature true as good unbelievable in the morning awakens breakfast was ready for everyone set like a feast Dishes where washed afterwards charming the company they claimed as family he was the perfect host celebrating with him lovingly happiness danced for joy Until the third day everyone was killed as they slept every trick under a sun was deployed emotionally corrupt slowly shedding layer after layer of heartbreaking tales not protecting our shield properly we fall an open target in the end we can see burdened choices cross over where silver and gold holds the key to open gates

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