One Birthday

Birthdays will come, ...We can't make them go
Some filled with excitement, some simply ho-hum
Others we dread, because they remind us
Of the swiftness of years, that are falling behind us

It marks off the years, and the the day we were born…
Acknowledgement comes in some custom or form
Perhaps we must please, or try to conform ….
         to the norms of our peer's celebration.

Perhaps if we're lucky,..a nice dinner to please
a gift, or a chat.... a candle or cake... the singing “the” song….
There's nothing wrong with all that!
But the older we get, no piñata to claim......no pictures to frame

So to recall one “event”…this birthday I spent…
Nice enough, I suppose …but the day decomposed 
We rushed to this place, on a workday eve.  
Not much time to dine, we'd be home by nine
A restaurant table….just a few of us able
No balloons, no cake, no candle, no flames
But acknowledgement, just the same

Over plates of ravioli…and eggplant parmesan
So nice….. but did I notice a few yawns???

Then one special moment, that won’t be forgotten
My little blonde grandson….who gave me a gift
He reached into his pocket…with a shy little grin
Said, “Here is Darth Vader….He is all that there is"….
And opened his hand, and his eyes so sincere
And gave me a gift to remember for years...
"It’s all that I have, I almost forgot
I hope you will like him..... I like him a lot..
"But he's yours if you like him….It's all that I’ve got."
"Happy Birthday Grandma…."


Happy Birthday To Me !!


 
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For "Birthday  Party Contest: Sponsor Nayda Ivette Negron
Revised 2/9/16
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Godwin Avatar
February 14, 2016 at 5:37 PM
No male child parts with Darth Vador without a great deal of love swaying him. Such sweet words, such a dear gift. Before I gush more about something that may be fiction, let me say I enjoyed the poem - good description of adult birthdays followed by a precious memory capture! CayCay
A   Avatar
February 11, 2016 at 10:15 PM
Carrie, Congrats in Nayda's "Birthday Party win." Love LINDA
Grammatico Avatar
February 11, 2016 at 8:54 AM
Very well done, Carrie. My grandson is also into Star Wars big time, so that resonated.
A. Sharma Avatar
February 11, 2016 at 4:31 AM
Congrats on ur awesome winning write Carrie!
Gentry Avatar
February 11, 2016 at 4:13 AM
Ahhhh sweet! Congratulations on your win.
Roper Avatar
February 10, 2016 at 8:39 PM
Carrie, you made me get a tear :'( children are amazing. Congratulations on your win!!!
Turner Avatar
February 10, 2016 at 8:14 PM
A very warm story, Carrie, the kind of grandson every grandmother dreams of. Congratulations on you win.
Johnson Avatar
February 10, 2016 at 6:19 PM
Such a darling grandson. Reminds me of the little son I had years ago. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
Allison Avatar
February 10, 2016 at 5:37 PM
oh Carrie this is so touching - I had a lump in my throat with your grandson's offering congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Gorelick Avatar
February 10, 2016 at 5:20 PM
A wonderful story. Congrats. BG
Negron Flores Avatar
February 10, 2016 at 5:12 PM
Congratulations on the placement of the contest Carrie
Williams Avatar
March 3, 2013 at 12:22 PM
Carrie just trawling through some old poems, I love this one and am ow very hungry....David
Brown Avatar
February 25, 2011 at 10:21 AM
Congratulations Carrie,on your win in Joyce Johnson's contest "Emotional Response". Love, Carol
Poet Avatar
February 23, 2011 at 11:16 PM
Very emotional write here Carrie.Enjoyed.Congrats on your win.
Guzzi Avatar
February 23, 2011 at 4:58 PM
GO Carry wonderful write I think it was too upbeat to win higher! OH well THANKYOU THANKYOU!!all this sad is too sad! Great kid there! Congrad's Light & Love
Sweetheart Avatar
February 23, 2011 at 4:31 AM
Congrats Carrie on your wonderful win in Joyce's contest with this dynamic entry .. another wonderful win for u to enjoy with luv..
Taylor Avatar
February 22, 2011 at 8:54 PM
Congrats on a well deserved win, Carrie. Nice going. Ralph
Pettit Avatar
February 22, 2011 at 8:31 PM
Joyce did like this one, Carrie. Congratulations on winning in her contest with this fine entry.
Mannan Avatar
February 22, 2011 at 8:24 PM
Beautiful, just beautiful.Many warm congrats for this win.
Onclaud Avatar
February 22, 2011 at 7:56 PM
this stirs the mind and engages the feelings, carrie… KUDOS to you for king-sized win, :) huggs, nette
Johnson Avatar
February 22, 2011 at 7:33 PM
LThis is very sweet Carrie. Congratulations. Love, joyce
Bloomsfield Avatar
February 15, 2011 at 9:42 AM
What a beauty sweet Carrie,lovely.
Onclaud Avatar
February 15, 2011 at 7:48 AM
how amazingly surprising this can be, carrie.. i love the way this was deftly dveloped to come to a delightful ending! wishes for a great win! :) huggs, nette
Mehta Avatar
February 15, 2011 at 5:38 AM
Very emotional piece of poetry, Carrie Good luck in the contest,
Rhinem Avatar
February 14, 2011 at 9:13 PM
S*M*I*L*E ~ "H*A*P*P*Y V*A*L*E*N*T*I*N*E*S D*A*Y M*Y D*E*A*R,,,B*E*A*U*T*I*F*U*L```C*A*R*R*I*E R*I*C*H*A*R*D*S¤¤¤'L*O*V*E,,,J*O*H*N!!!:))) ~
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