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One Big Hole

Cave man takes to the street seeking refuge, finding each niche filled, goes on searching for home, but they’re all Dumps Ninette Contest Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Caren Krutsinger Syllable counted 1/2/3/4/5/4/3/2/1 04/07/2021

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/12/2021 2:20:00 PM

great job here. Sorry if it did not get a win. For me it's a winner

David Kavanagh
Date: 7/12/2021 2:56:00 PM

Thank you Andrea, I’m delighted with your endorsement, life is indeed tough even for the tough ones, cheers David

Sotto Poet

Date: 7/3/2021 4:45:00 PM

David, as always, hit the nail on the head. I'm certain everyone searching for a place of safety or freedom will not be disappointed—my warmest wishes in the contest.

David Kavanagh
Date: 7/4/2021 12:39:00 AM

Hello Lasaad I had a typo issue earlier with this one, I’ve corrected it now, I was simply trying to compare the modern overcrowded uncaring streets as an impenetrable barrier to newcomers, by using a sturdy caveman, feeling hopeless and dejected, cheers David