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One Autumn Night

on that autumn night the moon foretold the harvest walking hand in hand we rejoiced at each red leaf moments in life so precious

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 12/28/2014 3:50:00 PM
Congratulations Barbara on winning with this touching Tanka!
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Date: 12/28/2014 9:41:00 AM
Congrats on a fine win BG
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Barbara Gorelick
Date: 12/28/2014 10:57:00 AM
Thank you dear, I know it takes time to visit and comment..I do appreciate it. Barbara
Date: 12/27/2014 1:04:00 PM
so glad to see this on the winners list - congrats:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 12/27/2014 12:03:00 PM
congratulations Barbara on your win ,so well done
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Barbara Gorelick
Date: 12/28/2014 10:58:00 AM
so nice of you to always be so positive with comments. Glad you stopped by and hope to have more time soon to read more of your work. Barbara
Date: 12/27/2014 10:02:00 AM
BARBARA, it's an honor having your poem on my winning list. Congratulations on your win in my Autumn Night's contest. A blessing it is to be back. I love nothing more than a free feeling of falling leaves drifting away at night. Thank you for the supporting one of my many soup contest. Stop by my latest blog "Together Alone" if you'd like. No problem if you don't have time. Just take this time and enjoy your win... LOVE LINDA
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Date: 9/12/2014 9:10:00 AM
Such a sensory write. Love it. Crickets, fireflies emerge, a scarecrow. I'm doing o.k. My eyesight is terrible though. Have to use a magnifying glass for everything. Great to hear from you. Love, daver
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Date: 9/8/2014 11:47:00 AM
Barbara this is a brilliant n romantic tanka! Love rejoicing at each red leaf,,, gl in contest!
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Date: 9/7/2014 9:41:00 PM
Dear BG: I love this autumnal mood. good for you. Leon
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Date: 9/7/2014 9:10:00 PM
i love this. good luck in the contest
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