One Autumn Night

on that autumn night
the moon foretold the harvest
walking hand in hand
we rejoiced at each red leaf
moments in life so precious
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Yvonne Avatar
December 28, 2014 at 3:50 PM
Congratulations Barbara on winning with this touching Tanka!
May Avatar
December 28, 2014 at 9:41 AM
Congrats on a fine win BG
Gorelick Avatar
December 28, 2014 at 10:57 AM
Thank you dear, I know it takes time to visit and comment..I do appreciate it. Barbara
Allison Avatar
December 27, 2014 at 1:04 PM
so glad to see this on the winners list - congrats:-) hugs jan xx
Stoner Jr Avatar
December 27, 2014 at 12:03 PM
congratulations Barbara on your win ,so well done
Gorelick Avatar
December 28, 2014 at 10:58 AM
so nice of you to always be so positive with comments. Glad you stopped by and hope to have more time soon to read more of your work. Barbara
A   Avatar
December 27, 2014 at 10:02 AM
BARBARA, it's an honor having your poem on my winning list. Congratulations on your win in my Autumn Night's contest. A blessing it is to be back. I love nothing more than a free feeling of falling leaves drifting away at night. Thank you for the supporting one of my many soup contest. Stop by my latest blog "Together Alone" if you'd like. No problem if you don't have time. Just take this time and enjoy your win... LOVE LINDA
Austin Avatar
September 12, 2014 at 9:10 AM
Such a sensory write. Love it. Crickets, fireflies emerge, a scarecrow. I'm doing o.k. My eyesight is terrible though. Have to use a magnifying glass for everything. Great to hear from you. Love, daver
A. Sharma Avatar
September 8, 2014 at 11:47 AM
Barbara this is a brilliant n romantic tanka! Love rejoicing at each red leaf,,, gl in contest!
Enriquez Avatar
September 7, 2014 at 9:41 PM
Dear BG: I love this autumnal mood. good for you. Leon
Yvonne Avatar
September 7, 2014 at 9:10 PM
i love this. good luck in the contest
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