One Adventure After Two---

Ah…..to spend one’s time wishing
with only ifs and turned down lips
no gift already given being enough
perhaps if in such disregard I lay
for wish for SERENITY is what I’d pray

Ah…to spend one’s time a wishing
and not to see the sky,
the majesty of baby smiles, the turning of the tides;
if they were not enough for me, which of course they are
and I went a wishing, wishing on a star,
perhaps, if into such disregard, I’d strayed
I’d hitch my hopes upon CONTENTMENT
with the hand I had been played.

Ah…..to spend one’s time in wishing
I’d not waste a cue. I’d satisfy all longing
with one ADVENTURE after two!
To live this life the fullness, this life I’d not decry
by spending time in pipe dreams
and staring into I.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 4/30/2010 10:02:00 PM
Great Job and thanks for the comment..
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Date: 4/30/2010 1:23:00 AM
I wish, I wish, I wish, yes a total waste of time, best to be doing, doing, doing.. love your poem, just awesome and like how you capitalized certain words, to make them stand out.. well done....constance
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Date: 4/29/2010 6:32:00 AM
good thoughts in an enjoyabe poem--great one!
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Date: 4/28/2010 7:58:00 AM
stay in the now, and you'll live your life to the fullest.
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Date: 4/28/2010 6:51:00 AM
I love the lesson here..... such an introspective verse....not to spend one's whole life wishing...but to find contentment in today! What insight into a common human fraility!! Lovely kyrielle poetry!!
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Date: 4/28/2010 6:02:00 AM
Great last three lines...That should be the theme of everyones life from the beginning...Not to spend life wanting what one cannot have...Keep the creative pen flowing...Sara
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Date: 4/28/2010 6:00:00 AM
good write , well written..
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