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One-Legged Sparrow

One drop fell down, one followed more Then my count failed, free downpour From two cloudy eyes, tears wishes feet My lone miseries, life's endless beat. On my bay, a sweet sparrow sat Flown from far, but resting at last In his beak a thread, thin long Kept his weight down, started a song. Weary of singing, he looked over wings In such small frame, life joyfully blinks Then I spot his one-legged walk How shameful my moans, how so dark! Oh God, tiny wings evinced glee In his woes, but a king in flee. Honorable Mention in BRIAN'S CHOICE F,any form,any theme Poetry Contest sponsored by Brian Strand

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Date: 5/19/2020 7:02:00 AM
Poor sparrow but still an inpiration. Great work friend.
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 5/19/2020 7:51:00 AM
Thank you Funom..Yes, a simple life inspiring us..
Date: 5/17/2020 3:11:00 PM
You've given a poor, lame sparrow into a regal persona! Bravo, Jenish! :) gw
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 5/17/2020 11:06:00 PM
Your delightful words made my day..Takecare Gershon..
Date: 5/16/2020 8:28:00 AM
We don't see the pain of others--a potent message, Jenish.
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 5/16/2020 9:13:00 AM
Thank you Vijay..
Date: 5/16/2020 3:09:00 AM
Even though he is very small with only one leg he is still able to sing and fly to great heights. It makes me ashamed of myself for moaning too. Lovely Poem Jenish ...
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 5/16/2020 3:24:00 AM
Thank you Shirley..Your poetic comments are such a support for my muse..Takecare..

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