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Once We All Were Child

there was a time when we used to be beautiful we were used to smile, ran atleast 2 miles we were used to create images of many mysterious objects we all were once child, play and smile without any panic for a while this is a tendency that everything which is born is due to die as even water is due to dry the birds which fly will one day fall and die the plants which were once green become shrink and fly yet they also die this life is only a test your time will come after a little rest you will be buried in a grave and will become a dust we all were once used to be child so kissed us on our forhead as we re bound to go to a world a world full of fairies, full of joy yet this is something which isn t confirmed one day we all shall be resurrected will stand infront of our God there will be two different sights the heaven which give joys and the hell which frights that day we shall remember all our frauds as that day only one power will rule that shall be of God if you don t believe it than you re a fool we re once used to be child so don t be afraid of tomorrow's sight just believe in God do good deeds as the time has started us to feed so don t be afraid of death as it is bound to come either early or later and there shall be a day when your name will totally fade away

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Date: 7/24/2018 5:39:00 PM
The little child in me can't die! I play each day, but in different ways from childhood. It's nice reading your feelngs on life and death. I wonder about reincarnation and other things! It's good that you have such faith in what you believe.
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Date: 2/26/2018 11:50:00 PM
Beautifully crafted and nicely penned..the whole cycle from Birth to Death.
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Date: 10/7/2017 4:25:00 PM
Wow that's really pretty. I read the poems you told me to. Very inspirational. Good job:)
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Faraz Ajmal
Date: 10/8/2017 8:17:00 AM
Many thanks for your time and comments, I really appreciate it
Date: 8/18/2017 9:19:00 AM
Nicely penned my friend xomo
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Date: 7/26/2017 7:06:00 AM
awesome ... you word out ideally... :)
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Date: 7/7/2017 2:02:00 PM
I'M FEELING REALLY MOTIVATED WHEN READING YOUR POEMS... GREAT JOB AGAIN.!!!!!!!!
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Date: 6/20/2017 12:30:00 PM
Justly felt and envisioned.
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Date: 6/14/2017 3:19:00 PM
Love the poem, I'm for cremation when I die. And for no one to be sad :)
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Date: 6/13/2017 6:02:00 PM
Hello Faraz, I like this poem. What you say is true. We are born and then in time we die. That goes for everyone.You did well on this poem.
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Date: 6/10/2017 3:29:00 PM
This is a really great poem. A keen perspective on the cycle of life.
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Date: 6/5/2017 12:39:00 PM
You make some wonderful insights about life. Especially 'we all were once child, play and smile without any panic for a while'
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Date: 6/3/2017 11:37:00 AM
I like the depth of your thinking. Intensly written.
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Date: 5/29/2017 4:16:00 PM
Hello! Whilst I did enjoy your poem, quite a lot, I do condone constructed criticism. Make sure you always try to check plurals, hahahaha. It happens, unless it's just your writing style. Gorgeous thoughts and ideas. Well enjoyed ~Scarlett
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Date: 5/28/2017 10:38:00 AM
Hi Faraz , ' Amen ' I am fifty but I have my inner child still with me and let hem out to play sometimes ,, great write very enjoyable read :)))
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Date: 5/27/2017 8:28:00 AM
This is a very beautiful conception. It makes me long for my childhood....and why do we long for it? For we had no responsibility we had parents to mind those and we could every silly things. Now as parent its our turn. Good luck on PS :)
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Faraz Ajmal
Date: 5/28/2017 6:58:00 AM
No matter how much we try to avoid but the realization of adulthood hit you earlier than you ve thought, you ll turn to 50 nd you ll not even realize it , the life is pretty short so enjoy every bit of it but don t forget that you also have to achieve something that is making God happy
Date: 5/26/2017 10:04:00 PM
deep thoughts my friend well written
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Date: 5/5/2017 4:50:00 PM
Thanks for sharing Faraz, Childhood memories for me are conflicting, the delights of a loving family and the nasty stuff that you have to contend with. All part of growing up and building your character. Correct we will all have to account for how we lived our lives. Kind regards, Craig
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Faraz Ajmal
Date: 5/5/2017 5:00:00 PM
Thanks for giving your honest reviews

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