Once We All Were Child

there was a time when we used to be beautiful
we were used to smile, ran atleast 2 miles
we were used to create images of many mysterious objects
we all were once child, 
play and smile without any panic for a while
this is a tendency
that everything which is born is due to die
as even water is due to dry
the birds which fly
will one day fall and die
the plants which were once green
become shrink and fly 
yet they also die

this life is only a test
your time will come after a little rest
you will be buried in a grave
and will become a dust

we all were once used to be child
so kissed us on our forhead
as we re bound to go to a world 
a world full of fairies, full of joy

yet this is something which isn t confirmed
one day we all shall be resurrected 
will stand infront of our God
there  will be two different sights 
the heaven which give joys
and the hell which frights
that day we shall remember all our frauds
as that day only one power will rule
that shall be of God
if you don t believe it than you re a fool

we re once used to be child
so don t be afraid of tomorrow's sight
just believe in God
do good deeds
as the time has started us to feed

so don t be afraid of death
as it is bound to come
either early or later
and there shall be a day
when your name will totally fade away
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017


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Date: 7/24/2018 5:39:00 PM
The little child in me can't die! I play each day, but in different ways from childhood. It's nice reading your feelngs on life and death. I wonder about reincarnation and other things! It's good that you have such faith in what you believe.
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Date: 2/26/2018 11:50:00 PM
Beautifully crafted and nicely penned..the whole cycle from Birth to Death.
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Date: 10/7/2017 4:25:00 PM
Wow that's really pretty. I read the poems you told me to. Very inspirational. Good job:)
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Faraz Ajmal
Date: 10/8/2017 8:17:00 AM
Many thanks for your time and comments, I really appreciate it
Date: 8/18/2017 9:19:00 AM
Nicely penned my friend xomo
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Date: 7/26/2017 7:06:00 AM
awesome ... you word out ideally... :)
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Date: 7/7/2017 2:02:00 PM
I'M FEELING REALLY MOTIVATED WHEN READING YOUR POEMS... GREAT JOB AGAIN.!!!!!!!!
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Date: 6/20/2017 12:30:00 PM
Justly felt and envisioned.
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Date: 6/14/2017 3:19:00 PM
Love the poem, I'm for cremation when I die. And for no one to be sad :)
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Date: 6/13/2017 6:02:00 PM
Hello Faraz, I like this poem. What you say is true. We are born and then in time we die. That goes for everyone.You did well on this poem.
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Date: 6/10/2017 3:29:00 PM
This is a really great poem. A keen perspective on the cycle of life.
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Date: 6/5/2017 12:39:00 PM
You make some wonderful insights about life. Especially 'we all were once child, play and smile without any panic for a while'
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Date: 6/3/2017 11:37:00 AM
I like the depth of your thinking. Intensly written.
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Date: 5/29/2017 4:16:00 PM
Hello! Whilst I did enjoy your poem, quite a lot, I do condone constructed criticism. Make sure you always try to check plurals, hahahaha. It happens, unless it's just your writing style. Gorgeous thoughts and ideas. Well enjoyed ~Scarlett
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Date: 5/27/2017 8:28:00 AM
This is a very beautiful conception. It makes me long for my childhood....and why do we long for it? For we had no responsibility we had parents to mind those and we could every silly things. Now as parent its our turn. Good luck on PS :)
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Faraz Ajmal
Date: 5/28/2017 6:58:00 AM
No matter how much we try to avoid but the realization of adulthood hit you earlier than you ve thought, you ll turn to 50 nd you ll not even realize it , the life is pretty short so enjoy every bit of it but don t forget that you also have to achieve something that is making God happy
Date: 5/26/2017 10:04:00 PM
deep thoughts my friend well written
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Date: 5/5/2017 4:50:00 PM
Thanks for sharing Faraz, Childhood memories for me are conflicting, the delights of a loving family and the nasty stuff that you have to contend with. All part of growing up and building your character. Correct we will all have to account for how we lived our lives. Kind regards, Craig
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Faraz Ajmal
Date: 5/5/2017 5:00:00 PM
Thanks for giving your honest reviews
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