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Once Upon a Time, Once Again

“Well she's walking through the clouds” Little wings keep her upright as she strolls through the sunrise now brightly glowing within my heart, blind to my feelings “With a circus mind that's running wild” Beneath azure tents of atmosphere, smiling at another perfect day in her world While tame white tigers roar on cue “Butterflies and zebras” Watercolor happiness fills her eyes as she chases the beauty that is her nature, caressing all that she touches with the wonder that is her essence “And moonbeams and fairy tales” Moonbeam, something I have not called her and once upon a times, when poppies and dandelions sing the saddest of songs for my desires flood in a downpour of dreams not realized “That's all she ever thinks about” While frolicking childlike atop cotton candy visions never once looking my way, finding this love I hold so gently, only for her “Riding with the wind” On whispered zephyrs she disappears as day drinks of twilight and weary eyes find star light harsh…I sleep, waiting for the new day, waiting for her…once again The italicized lines are lyric’s from the Jimi Hendrix song “Little Wing” but I prefer the version by Sting just a bit more.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 12/1/2016 6:39:00 AM
How did you not call her a sunbeam? :) jk...Sunbeam sounds very romantic..You know what..Why can' t I think of such beauty to write..I am jealous in a good way for your seven muses...They inspire you so deeply and beautifully..You must be in love..to write love like this..Awesome..Btw..I prefer Sting's version too :). Fantabulous!!!
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Charmaine Chircop
Date: 12/2/2016 9:02:00 AM
Im glad you write such masterpieces : )
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Chris Green
Date: 12/1/2016 10:52:00 AM
Thanks so very much Charmaine. No need for you to be jealous because I think I have that emotion cornered after reading yours that I did yesterday. You write so beautifully and all should be jealous of your talent when it comes to love poetry. But I do appreciate you saying so about my work. Your kindness makes these poems worth writing.
Date: 11/30/2016 10:09:00 PM
This song sounds better, Chris:) great write as always:)
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Chris Green
Date: 12/1/2016 10:49:00 AM
Thanks so much Jo. I really appreciate that.
Date: 11/30/2016 8:07:00 PM
I love that song, (didn't Jeff Healey do a great version of it also) he would be proud of your addition. Well done mate.
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Chris Green
Date: 12/1/2016 10:49:00 AM
I think you are right. Thanks for the encouragement my friend.
Date: 11/30/2016 7:43:00 PM
This is a truly brilliant poem, Chris. This poem has an atmosphere all it's own. Jimi Hendrix would totally dig it.
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Chris Green
Date: 11/30/2016 7:53:00 PM
Thanks so much Christy. Little Wing is one of my favorite songs and I just needed to write this. I am really excited that you enjoyed this. That makes me happy.

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