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Once Upon a Time

Once upon a time, I loved a princess She had no kingdom to speak of But even a moment of her time was priceless Nor did she have Royal Blood For her blood was that of a commoner Once upon a time, I loved a princess She was fair as can be, just look in her eyes to see The depth of her soul, for she truly knew pain But the scars on her heart, I hoped to wash away with the rain She was not perfect by any means, but she was a princess to me Once upon a time, I loved a princess Or at least that’s what she was to me Her wish was my command, for her love I would withstand The rage of a thousand nations if just for a moment I could see That love that twinkled in her eye whenever her eyes gazed Upon a commoner like me; For I am nothing compared to my princess Once upon a time, I killed a princess I did not harm her body, t’was her soul that I killed For when I left her crying, wounded in the street I could not let our bodies touch, nor our faces meet I left my princess bleeding in the street Her heart was bleeding, her voice was pleading “Please! No!” she screamed to the lonely moon And then and there I knew that I was no knight in shining armor I was the devil in disguise and I destroyed my princess’ kingdom With my words full of lies Once upon a time, I loved a princess And once upon a time, she loved me… *Dedicated to a time when I loved a girl who loved me more than life itself. I left her and she was never, and I feel never will be, the same again. It sill hurts me to this day to think that I caused her so much pain. P.S. Let me know what you think in the comments below!

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Date: 3/21/2015 5:51:00 PM
R.C. LEWIS:) Thank you so much for the reply. That was nice of you to comment my comment. ((Regarding the reply you left in my comment box)) Always ~LINDA~
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Date: 9/10/2014 4:22:00 AM
Warm welcome to PoetrySoup,Jeremy - I choose your first lovely and moving written free verse - You write skillfully - Nice to meet you! - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- Be kind and keep PoetrySoup as a haven -(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you for posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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R.C. Lewis
Date: 9/10/2014 12:42:00 PM
Thank you, Anne.
Date: 9/9/2014 6:09:00 PM
This is such a deep powerful piece that tugs at the heart with regret for a lost love - but an excellent write! A warm welcome to PoetrySoup, and happy writings! Pandita
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R.C. Lewis
Date: 9/10/2014 12:42:00 PM
Thank you, Pandita. :)
Date: 9/8/2014 5:49:00 PM
Jeremy,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry:) Here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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R.C. Lewis
Date: 9/8/2014 10:07:00 PM
Thanks, Linda. I honestly stumbled upon this site when I followed an ex-girlfriends poems here. I wrote this one almost immediately after we broke up and this is my first time sharing it. Please let me know what you think!!

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