Once Upon a Curse: Once Upon a Time

Once Upon A Curse

She’d pricked her finger, and for years she slept
inside the castle in her pretty room.
Her parents and the entire village wept
for she was cursed, and they knew only gloom.

True love’s kiss was needed to break the spell.
So many handsome princes tried to wake
her up, but all they ever did was fail.
Was this a spell that nobody could break?

There was a small red frog beside the door
of Sleeping Beauty’s room. Each day it came
and watched her sleep.  But let me tell you more!
This frog was once a person with a name.

The frog, for being different, one sad day,
was told by a bad witch, “Here’s what I’ll do.
I’ll change you to a frog. A frog you’ll stay
until you kiss a girl who thinks like you.”

The frog adored the Beauty, and at last
the frog got courage; hopping to her bed,
the frog kissed Sleeping Beauty’s lips. Aghast,
her parents watched as Beauty raised her head!

Though true love’s kiss had waken her, it was
no charming prince who now before them stood.
‘Twas “Little Red.” Their daughter woke because
she loved the frog with last name “Riding Hood.”

Feb 4, 2016
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Arnone Avatar
April 23, 2016 at 1:01 PM
A modern version of Sleeping Beauty where, in the end, it is a woman who awakens Snow and both live happily ever after (in some uncharacteristically progressive, fairy tale land).... :-)
Parmale Avatar
March 3, 2016 at 9:21 PM
Hi Andrea...I love your poems.....I am a new poet n want to write something great like You,S1,Tim and Nance on group....You people always come up with great ideas and pen it down with damn ease...Plz read my poems and give me your valuable inputs.... If you could...
Walker Avatar
February 11, 2016 at 8:27 AM
Ha Ha, what a twist. Love this.
Sankey- Lewis Avatar
February 11, 2016 at 8:17 AM
Wonderful surprise ending I so love.
Zozulya Avatar
February 10, 2016 at 5:16 AM
This is great!
Beaufort Avatar
February 8, 2016 at 6:38 AM
I love it. This is a wonderful lesson for all. It should be read in every classroom and every political gathering. You got me!!! I wasn't expecting what you did.
Roper Avatar
February 7, 2016 at 10:40 PM
I love your story, Andrea!!! Congratulations on your win :-)
Inman Avatar
February 7, 2016 at 12:10 PM
Interesting write Andrea. Enjoyed the store and the ending. Love is love.
Wigley Avatar
February 7, 2016 at 2:41 AM
Didn't see that coming. great write, great twist, congrats! Viv x
Marcum Wong Avatar
February 6, 2016 at 7:28 PM
Oh, gosh, I see it did win...I will have to go see where you places. These contests close and seem to be judged so quickly. Congrats!
Marcum Wong Avatar
February 6, 2016 at 7:27 PM
Okay....this is really a twist on the fairytale Andrea. Leave it to your imagination to come up with something so original. Brava my friend! I enjoyed it and am pretty sure it will do great in the contest. I haven't attempted it yet. #7
Konos Avatar
February 6, 2016 at 5:46 PM
Poetry with a twist....really like it ....Congratulations.....
Lane Avatar
February 6, 2016 at 5:20 PM
Sooo, Sleeping Beauty and Red, huh? Congratulations on this one, Andrea.
May Avatar
February 6, 2016 at 12:16 PM
Congrats on your win Andrea...
Haight Avatar
February 6, 2016 at 11:32 AM
Great take on the tale, Andrea! Congratulations on your fine win. Hugs, Sandra
Onclaud Avatar
February 6, 2016 at 11:22 AM
i knew this would place high, andie.. sweet congrats!..huggs
Allison Avatar
February 6, 2016 at 11:05 AM
Great rhyme and flow to your lovely tale congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Scars Avatar
February 6, 2016 at 10:53 AM
Andrea, thank you for being a part of my contest and I love your take on the theme. A great write, thank you *Smiles* :)-luloo
Trifiatis Avatar
February 6, 2016 at 3:44 AM
True love performs miracles and this version of the story is a...miraculous one, dear Andrea. Excellent performanc!
Onclaud Avatar
February 6, 2016 at 2:11 AM
ohh, this plot is so unique and loveable, andie... i did something on this beauty though yours is much better!... huggs
Anish Avatar
February 5, 2016 at 11:12 PM
I used to read Grimm's Fairy Tales to my nephew so this one had an impact on me. Clever work here! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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