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Once Upon a Curse: Once Upon a Time

Once Upon A Curse She’d pricked her finger, and for years she slept inside the castle in her pretty room. Her parents and the entire village wept for she was cursed, and they knew only gloom. True love’s kiss was needed to break the spell. So many handsome princes tried to wake her up, but all they ever did was fail. Was this a spell that nobody could break? There was a small red frog beside the door of Sleeping Beauty’s room. Each day it came and watched her sleep. But let me tell you more! This frog was once a person with a name. The frog, for being different, one sad day, was told by a bad witch, “Here’s what I’ll do. I’ll change you to a frog. A frog you’ll stay until you kiss a girl who thinks like you.” The frog adored the Beauty, and at last the frog got courage; hopping to her bed, the frog kissed Sleeping Beauty’s lips. Aghast, her parents watched as Beauty raised her head! Though true love’s kiss had waken her, it was no charming prince who now before them stood. ‘Twas “Little Red.” Their daughter woke because she loved the frog with last name “Riding Hood.” Feb 4, 2016

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Date: 4/23/2016 1:01:00 PM
A modern version of Sleeping Beauty where, in the end, it is a woman who awakens Snow and both live happily ever after (in some uncharacteristically progressive, fairy tale land).... :-)
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Date: 3/3/2016 9:21:00 PM
Hi Andrea...I love your poems.....I am a new poet n want to write something great like You,S1,Tim and Nance on group....You people always come up with great ideas and pen it down with damn ease...Plz read my poems and give me your valuable inputs.... If you could...
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Date: 2/11/2016 8:27:00 AM
Ha Ha, what a twist. Love this.
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Date: 2/11/2016 8:17:00 AM
Wonderful surprise ending I so love.
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Date: 2/10/2016 5:16:00 AM
This is great!
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Date: 2/8/2016 6:38:00 AM
I love it. This is a wonderful lesson for all. It should be read in every classroom and every political gathering. You got me!!! I wasn't expecting what you did.
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Date: 2/7/2016 10:40:00 PM
I love your story, Andrea!!! Congratulations on your win :-)
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Date: 2/7/2016 12:10:00 PM
Interesting write Andrea. Enjoyed the store and the ending. Love is love.
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Date: 2/7/2016 2:41:00 AM
Didn't see that coming. great write, great twist, congrats! Viv x
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Date: 2/6/2016 7:28:00 PM
Oh, gosh, I see it did win...I will have to go see where you places. These contests close and seem to be judged so quickly. Congrats!
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Date: 2/6/2016 7:27:00 PM
Okay....this is really a twist on the fairytale Andrea. Leave it to your imagination to come up with something so original. Brava my friend! I enjoyed it and am pretty sure it will do great in the contest. I haven't attempted it yet. #7
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Date: 2/6/2016 5:46:00 PM
Poetry with a twist....really like it ....Congratulations.....
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Date: 2/6/2016 5:20:00 PM
Sooo, Sleeping Beauty and Red, huh? Congratulations on this one, Andrea.
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Date: 2/6/2016 12:16:00 PM
Congrats on your win Andrea...
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Date: 2/6/2016 11:32:00 AM
Great take on the tale, Andrea! Congratulations on your fine win. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 2/6/2016 11:22:00 AM
i knew this would place high, andie.. sweet congrats!..huggs
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Date: 2/6/2016 11:05:00 AM
Great rhyme and flow to your lovely tale congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 2/6/2016 10:53:00 AM
Andrea, thank you for being a part of my contest and I love your take on the theme. A great write, thank you *Smiles* :)-luloo
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Date: 2/6/2016 3:44:00 AM
True love performs miracles and this version of the story is a...miraculous one, dear Andrea. Excellent performanc!
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Date: 2/6/2016 2:11:00 AM
ohh, this plot is so unique and loveable, andie... i did something on this beauty though yours is much better!... huggs
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Date: 2/5/2016 11:12:00 PM
I used to read Grimm's Fairy Tales to my nephew so this one had an impact on me. Clever work here! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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