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Once Upon a Cloud

The duck swam fast to beat the crowd Behind him a rabbit played with a wheel To my dismay a lady cowed The duck then eat her for his meal And then I watched as a giraffe did kneel A dragon roared past, its like a dream A dog held up his paws in prayer A bull raged through the crowd it seems But none did move, none seemed to scare Cloud stories are magical, this I do swear. © 15/08/2013 GG Contest Entry

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/31/2013 9:05:00 AM

Good morning Mandy...love the win...Linda

Danesh Morgan

Date: 8/27/2013 6:58:00 PM

clouds stories indeed Mandy Congrats to you on your win. Morgan

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/27/2013 12:02:00 PM

I enjoy letting my imagination run wild with those puffy fluffy clouds also..Congrats on your win with this very delightful work..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

Carrie Richards

Date: 8/27/2013 9:06:00 AM

Someone else sees the clouds the same as I do !!! You are the only other one who wrote with the whims of a child........I love it!!

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 8/27/2013 8:13:00 AM

Fantastic! I love how you did this one. Congratulations!

Joseph May

Date: 8/27/2013 6:44:00 AM

congrats on a fine win Mandy

Skat A

Date: 8/26/2013 8:31:00 PM

a good win... ~Love ~~SKAT

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 8/26/2013 8:31:00 PM

This made me smile and smile. congrats on your in in my contest. BG

Bukang Liwayway

Date: 8/16/2013 11:48:00 PM

wow!! I like this magical stories of yours friend Mandy...it's lovely..good luck for the contest..hugs, maria

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 8/16/2013 7:21:00 AM

very nice Mandy gl with it Shadow x smiles

Harry Horsman

Date: 8/16/2013 3:37:00 AM

just love this Mandy, really do, i too love the clouds, and written about them often with the same mind set as you have..of course some folks thought i was on something, but never mind the image they can create as they float around in all shapes and sizes,, certainly have come across here, in this poem....