Once Pretty Snow

dirty frozen gray piles iced over ruining driveway ditches what once was pretty snow

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Mahtab Bangalee

Date: 2/27/2019 2:49:00 AM

oh gray piles iced over!

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 2/27/2019 6:16:00 AM

They are all over here today, Mahtab. I am not tempted to go out. School is once again cancelled. 10th day.

Ann Gilmour

Date: 2/23/2019 6:05:00 PM

Oh dear, it sounds so ugly and grey Caren, let's hope for a thaw before too long. Kindest thoughts Ann xx

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 2/27/2019 6:17:00 AM

I am so ready. We were scheduled to be out of school on May 22nd. Now we are going until June 4th, and school is cancelled for the 10th time today due to ice.

M. L. Kiser

Date: 2/23/2019 9:59:00 AM

Yep, it's beautiful until the grime sets in. Well done; great imagery.

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 2/23/2019 1:30:00 PM

It is so ugly here right now, it can put you into a dour mood if you are so inclined.