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Once More

What ponders, My heart's corridors, Is a thought pressing bondage, To flow and to pour, To fly, be free, and breathe, Once more; If everything, Could pleasantly be, Forever more.

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Brenda Chiri

Date: 7/2/2019 3:28:00 AM

Lovely write my friend! Imagine reading you on here! Lol! ;)

Marquis Mc Mills-Cooper

Date: 6/25/2019 2:57:00 AM

Ahhhh, the heart has many corridors my friend. I like this one....be free once more, forever more! Nice work MC

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/13/2019 12:14:00 PM

this is a lovely expression of your emotion, J.T.

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 4/7/2019 11:06:00 AM

An inner wish to feel free and fly - could it be possible, the heart wants this and the mind and pen confirm this feeling - to feel free, to breathe! Imagination at its best! Poetry hugs, Jennifer.

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri

Date: 3/10/2019 12:29:00 AM

A dreamy poem flying superbly on wings of imagination wow. Kudos. Soo nice to read from u again, Plz do comment or just read my newest poem too

Rhona Mcferran

Date: 3/9/2019 9:39:00 PM

The part "To fly, be free, and breathe/ Once more" really caught my attention in this piece... Wish I could feel that way, too. Nice work!