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Once Love So Real, Now Mere Echo

Sullen gray-and-black leaden fingers unclosing against vast sky, cause the outside world seems to run away in grim silence. Once love so real, now mere echo in the weak moonlight rays as fragrant gold flaming honeysuckle vines bound into a braid around too narrow garden bower. I sit on a settee, in the pavilion, my head down with cherishing sadness.
8/22/2019

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Date: 9/30/2019 7:03:00 PM
Eve, I was captivated by the poignant imagery of your poem, as I too, was cherishing the sadness. An expressive and intimate portrait of grief. Thank you for sharing your heart. Congratulations on your wonderful win. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
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Date: 9/28/2019 1:03:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your winning poem. Congrats Eve.
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Date: 9/26/2019 7:36:00 PM
Very nice Eve congrats on a fine win!
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Date: 8/22/2019 12:10:00 PM
a double treat of a nonet soaring with mellow tones of grief, eve... ever lovely!...huggs
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Date: 8/22/2019 10:45:00 AM
Beautifully sad Eve. I love what you have crafted here
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Date: 8/22/2019 2:26:00 AM
The tale of fading love, love the layout Eve. If it's for a contest good luck. Tom.
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