Once Lived Life As Both Fox and Chasing Hound

Once Lived Life As Both Fox And Chasing Hound

Once lived life as both fox and chasing hound
each one thinking, they were true, honor bound.
As the fox, took great pride in being shrewd
failed often to see my actions were crude.

When fleeing forth in life at lightning pace
taking too much as I ran, a disgrace.
Never worried about deep and high costs
figured each cold Winter brought killing frosts.

When chasing old fox, my mind went astray
swearing to catch and eat him every day.
With each new dawn, my hunger more intense
I failed to see myself being so dense.

One sad dawn, I caught that shifty ole fox
his words showed me my big, dark prison box.
Blessed reprieve for him, I did not eat
His wisest move and both our greatest feat.

Once lived life as both fox and chasing hound
each one thinking, they were true, honor bound.
As the fox, took great pride in being shrewd
failed often to see my actions, were crude.

Robert J. Lindley, 3-25-2017

Syllables Per Line:
10 10 10 10 0 10 10 10 10 0 10 10 10 10 0 10 10 10 10 0 10 10 10 10
Total # Syllables: 200
Total # Words: 164

Note- Inspired by Tim Smith's free verse poem--titled the
 -- The Fox And The Hound.--
  https://www.poetrysoup.com/poem/the_fox_and_the_hound_884102

As I do not do free verse very well, methinks, I went with personification in rhyme and ten syllable verses.
Thank you my friend Tim Smith, for the great inspiration.. your free verse poem and its creativity
and depth inspired this effort by me , written in a much different poetry form.
I hope this poem written this morn, may honor your poem well, as an inspired tribute to it.
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Vinson Avatar
April 6, 2017 at 3:24 PM
Robert, so well done! Hits home with me. How we go through life....
Dietrich Avatar
April 1, 2017 at 10:13 AM
Great inspiration, Robert and very nice personification. HOpe you are enjoying the day. Wish I could think up an April Fool's prank for my sisters!!
Daniel Avatar
March 26, 2017 at 9:20 AM
Great poem, Robert, off to read Tim's now:)
Smith Avatar
March 25, 2017 at 5:04 PM
What an amazing poem my friend. I am happy my simple words could inspire such beauty...A fav
Lamoureux Avatar
March 25, 2017 at 8:54 AM
What an interesting perspective Robert. Well done!
Sands Avatar
March 25, 2017 at 8:29 AM
Well done Robert. Very creative :)
Capitano Avatar
March 25, 2017 at 8:17 AM
This is so good Robert, the two sides of life, the chasing and the chased. Excellent.
Wolf Avatar
March 25, 2017 at 8:16 AM
You are a true wordsmith, Robert! And yes, in my opinion, you have definitely done it justice. Great penmanship mate.
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