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Once He Had Some Pedigree

 
He exists in the shade of the mandrake plant, It is his only passion in this twisted world; Face down in the dirt- drugged and delirious, Does not care if he wakes up or who walks by; Hey man, it is what it is, just keep walking. Is he alive, better take his pulse, go away, And in his hallucination, a giant with one eye; Takes him up and away, to a high nasty place, Who is he, who was he, of no consequence really; His family tree is lost in a dream, forgotten. He comes in and out of warped dreams horrific, Tears and thoughts of suicide, maybe kill someone; It seems like a real good idea, but he fights it, Cause, hey, God hates a coward like him; He used to play his music, once .. Yeah, once upon a time, he had some pedigree . . _____________________________ March 25, 2016 Poetry/Verse/Once He Had Some Pedigree Copyright Protected, ID 16-771-949-0 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym Inspiration - Lyrics - God Hates A Coward by Tomahawk For the contest, Lyrics, sponsor, Rob Carmack Sixth Place
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Scars Avatar
April 26, 2016 at 3:01 PM
Broken Wings, a wonderful poem! congrats on your placement in the contest :)-luloo
La France Avatar
April 26, 2016 at 3:14 PM
Laura, thanks for the wonderful and the congrats ~
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April 25, 2016 at 6:30 PM
Congratulations Broken Wings... Hope you are well...Linda
La France Avatar
April 26, 2016 at 3:15 PM
Linda, thanks so much for the congratulations, oh yes I am quite wonderful !
Flower Avatar
April 25, 2016 at 12:44 PM
Congrats on your placement, Constancia. hugs.
La France Avatar
April 25, 2016 at 5:30 PM
Moon, thanks for the congrats ~
Kimathi Avatar
April 25, 2016 at 3:28 AM
Congrats BW, for your placement with this rich, literary piece!!! ;-)
La France Avatar
April 25, 2016 at 9:47 AM
Teddy thanks for the congrats and the compliment
A. Sharma Avatar
April 24, 2016 at 10:37 PM
Congrats on ur awesome win with this superb write Broken..
La France Avatar
April 24, 2016 at 10:39 PM
upma thanks for the congrats, the awesome and superb
Haight Avatar
April 24, 2016 at 8:50 AM
Great interpretation, Broken Wings. Congratulations on your placement in the contest. Hugs, Sandra
La France Avatar
April 24, 2016 at 10:09 AM
Sandra, thanks for the congratulations and the hugs ...
Carmack Avatar
April 23, 2016 at 9:59 PM
One of the reasons I chose these lyrics, the variety of interpretations. I liked your poem and thank you for supporting my contests.
La France Avatar
April 24, 2016 at 7:33 AM
Rob, thanks for the great contest, and for my wonderful placement, so appreciated !
Dietrich Avatar
March 26, 2016 at 8:59 PM
wow, Constance you are amazing to come up with this. I still don't get it!! Rob should just love this. I did your contest and others today, just not posted quite yet. Scrambling to do comments. Joe is on his way home and yikes, I have little time!!!
La France Avatar
March 27, 2016 at 10:13 AM
Andrea, thanks for visiting with the wow, when I read the lyrics, it just seems like a drug addicted hallucination, hope Rob likes it !
Smith Avatar
March 26, 2016 at 7:07 AM
We've all seen this guy, hope not many have been him. Vivid, graphically good write B/W...
La France Avatar
March 26, 2016 at 1:15 PM
Charlie, thanks for visiting, yes we see them all around us, and the sad thing is they were all at one time someone's beautiful baby ~
Barry Avatar
March 25, 2016 at 8:56 PM
Beautiful melancholy Broken.
La France Avatar
March 25, 2016 at 9:21 PM
Timothy, thanks for visiting with the beautiful !
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