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Hidden in spaces of my heart
Are your charm and eyes that glow
Knowing I can’t be apart--
From all that gives me fire of life

But now those glances turn away,
Turn away, when morning breaks
No, no, our times won’t delay
This grim pathway of nevermore.

~ Chorus:

So for once, let’s embrace a dream
To find white roses in the sky,
To hold vows through days supreme
And waste not fate calling…for once.

Then let our yearnings be the light
Believe in us , rain or sun
I’ll promise you, a love so right
My ardent need…for once, be mine. 


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Your Best Unacclaimed Pom Contest
Sponsor: John Hamilton
Written 9/10/2020, Submitted 10/1/2020

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020




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Date: 10/2/2020 9:39:00 AM
A wonderfully touching write congrats Nette on a nice win!
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Date: 9/11/2020 12:38:00 AM
Beautiful, I am curious if this was to a famous song, either way I liked! xoxo
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Date: 9/10/2020 11:59:00 PM
The beat of your words glides sweetly, not too overpowering. Must be the peak of love's story. Splendid!
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Date: 9/10/2020 11:27:00 PM
Beautifully written Nette. Good luck in the contest Tom
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