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On Your Own

Once young and naïve, I fell for your charms. And yet, now, I must abandon your arms. I will tiptoe out when the night turns black. And scurry away without looking back. Asleep with your dreams you lie unaware. And it hurts inside, because I still care. But all my hopes got scuttled in mid-stream. And there's more to love than a worn-out dream. I can't live a lie or try to pretend. Though you'll always be much more than a friend. Tomorrow you'll feel confused and alone. But you'll be better off; there, on your own. (Quatrain) 1/15/2015

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Date: 3/14/2018 12:38:00 PM
Very interesting perspective on a breakup. Well done.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 3/14/2018 2:04:00 PM
Thanks Line, your comments and support are much appreciated, Emile.
Date: 1/15/2015 1:10:00 PM
Beautiful...
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Emile Pinet
Date: 1/15/2015 6:17:00 PM
Thank you very much, your support. Emile.
Date: 1/15/2015 10:16:00 AM
Well expressed pen Emile! very nice but sad pen about worn out emotions and dreams of a love gone completely stale and sour. it happens a lot in real life as well as in the movies and novels. So bitter-sweet I believe that no matter what some love always stays alive in our hearts no matter the experience, make it positive or negative that's up to the individual and it surely takes a lot of heart and kindness not to convert it into hatred. And hate for me is never a choice, but that's only me. A 7 from me! Have a nice day! :) Love and hugs!xxxx D.^o^"
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Emile Pinet
Date: 1/15/2015 6:19:00 PM
Dorian, I am touched by your words and humbled by your praise. Thank you, Emile.

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