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Poet Jueju

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March.2-2026

Poem Your Voice Poetry Contest

Sponsor- Charles Messina

Placed Fifth in the Premier Contest.

On Versification- JU

Versifying is an art.
One’s course of thoughts, it can chart.
Sing loud your heart’s sweet refrain,
And harness some fruitful gain.

What you hold silent in heart,
Spill out, it may hit like dart.
If you put apt words in rhyme,
The outcome will be sublime.

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Sara Kendrick

March 20, 2026 at 5:01 PM

Creative winning work in Charles' contest. Way to go. Back with congratulations to you. Sara K

Charles Messina

March 19, 2026 at 2:44 AM

So very nicely written, Valsa. Congratulations on your placement in my contest! Thanks for entering... Charlie

Linda Alice Fowler

March 18, 2026 at 10:59 AM

Love the last two lines especially Valsa. Congratulations! :)

sara Etgen-Baker

March 6, 2026 at 10:28 PM

loved this, the flow made for such a delightful read; especially liked the last 4 lines

Daniel Henry Rodgers

March 3, 2026 at 5:12 AM

Dear Valsa, a lovely reminder of why we do what we do. I especially liked the line about how a silent thought can "hit like a dart" once it’s finally spilled onto the page, it’s a perfect description of that breakthrough moment in writing. Such a sweet refrain! Blessings, Daniel

Victor Buhagiar

March 3, 2026 at 1:14 AM

That's when I generally fail because rhyme is difficult for me. Great poem. Best for a win.

Angela Terry

March 2, 2026 at 10:59 PM

I like the rhythm and the rhyme in this poem.

Andrea Dietrich

March 2, 2026 at 1:21 PM

I love how you did yours for the contest. Great job, Valsa

Jay Narain

March 2, 2026 at 11:58 AM

True. Nice poem.

Ink Empress

March 2, 2026 at 9:34 AM

How true is this dear sweet valsa, your way with rhymes truly is impressive and im in awe of what youve delivered here so seamlessly! Yes we write what we feel and spill everything and soulful readers like you feel them, like our words are darts to your heart! Im thankful for that! I love love what youv said here and its a new fave for me for sure! Pleasure visiting you today! Sending you light always

Joanna Daniel

March 2, 2026 at 5:30 AM

Oh, yeah, hit right on spot:)

Sara Kendrick

March 2, 2026 at 4:08 AM

This one reads like a good contender to me. I have looked over some of the contest but can't remember right now which goes with which contest. LOL..Old age seems to hit in so many places. Thanks for sharing this one with us. Sara K