On Valentines Day

I went to a party for lonely hearts, With friends to celebrate singleness; The invitation read, cake, chocolate and tarts. We played games like charades to show our smarts, Truth and Dare was just full of silliness; I went to a party for lonely hearts. We drank pink margaritas and played darts, Home made decorations showed artfulness; The invitation read, cake, chocolate and tarts. The centerpiece was made of fruit parts, Hanging the red lanterns took adeptness; I went to a party for lonely hearts. The party goes to the top of all charts, Conversations were full of absurbness; The invitation read, cake, chocolate and tarts. Memories made, like the most finest arts, Being with friends was blissfulness; I went to a party for lonely hearts, The invitation read, cake, chocolate and tarts. ____________________________ February 14, 2016 Poetry/Villanelle/On Valentines Day Copyright Protected, ID 756-762-0 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. For the contest, Your Valentine Day, 2016 sponsor, Shadow Hamilton First Place
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March 20, 2016 at 11:23 PM
Broken Wings, Congratulations on your "Valentine's Day 2016 WIN." Love LINDA
La France Avatar
March 21, 2016 at 2:24 PM
Linda, thanks for the congratulations and the love !
Parmale Avatar
March 18, 2016 at 11:54 AM
Hey congrats dear for this beautiful Creation and winning the contest!!!
La France Avatar
March 18, 2016 at 12:09 PM
Anand, thanks for the congrats and the beautiful !
Kimathi Avatar
March 17, 2016 at 4:10 AM
Hi BW. Congrats for your first placement once again with one of your finest works!!! ;-)
La France Avatar
March 17, 2016 at 7:33 AM
Teddy thanks for visiting with congrats and compliments !
Tagore Avatar
March 16, 2016 at 8:39 PM
Wonderful write, Constance. Enjoyed the party. Congrats and hugs, Bobby
La France Avatar
March 17, 2016 at 2:20 AM
Bobby, thanks for visiting with the wonderful, congrats and hugs !
Cheema Avatar
March 16, 2016 at 12:53 PM
You have a won a Valentine special, Constance! Congrats!
La France Avatar
March 16, 2016 at 3:33 PM
Balveen thanks for visiting with the congratulations
Mcclain Avatar
March 16, 2016 at 10:36 AM
Hi Broken Wings, Congrats on your 1st place win for this beautiful poem with its very clever alternating refrains -- The -ness for each second line is also a good device, well done! Cheers, Brian
La France Avatar
March 16, 2016 at 1:08 PM
Brian, thanks for visiting with the beautiful and the compliment. ..
A. Sharma Avatar
March 16, 2016 at 1:34 AM
Congrats on ur awesome first place win Broken..
La France Avatar
March 16, 2016 at 8:29 AM
Upma, thanks for the congrats and the awesome !
Smith Avatar
March 15, 2016 at 9:50 PM
Well done Constance, congratulations
La France Avatar
March 15, 2016 at 9:55 PM
Charlie, thanks for visiting with congratulations ~
Tor Avatar
March 15, 2016 at 9:38 PM
Congratulations Constance!!!
La France Avatar
March 15, 2016 at 10:00 PM
Michael, thanks for visiting with the congratulations, appreciate !
Johnson Avatar
March 15, 2016 at 6:14 PM
Congratulations Constance for your big no.1 well deserved. The Villanelle is rather fun. Love, Joyce
La France Avatar
March 15, 2016 at 6:16 PM
Joyce, thanks for the congratulations, yes I loved the villanelle form !
Dietrich Avatar
March 15, 2016 at 3:43 PM
FANTASTICO, both the win AND this cute poem!! Congrats
La France Avatar
March 15, 2016 at 4:15 PM
Andrea, thanks so much for fantastico, love that word, and the compliment and congrats !
Roper Avatar
March 15, 2016 at 3:41 PM
Congratulations on your 1st place win! Absolutely lovely!!!!
La France Avatar
March 15, 2016 at 4:17 PM
Eve, thanks for the congratulations and the lovely !!!
Scars Avatar
March 15, 2016 at 2:00 PM
BW, congrats on your top placement in the contest! -luloo
La France Avatar
March 15, 2016 at 2:23 PM
Laura, thanks for visiting with the congrats ~
Haight Avatar
March 15, 2016 at 8:51 AM
Love your poem, Broken Wings. As James below wrote, "an air of melancholy." Beautifully written, and congrats on your top win. 7, Hugs, Sandra
La France Avatar
March 15, 2016 at 1:52 PM
Sandra, thanks for the love, the beautiful, the congrats, the 7 and the hugs, don't all my writes have melancholy . . .
Inman Avatar
March 15, 2016 at 5:45 AM
Nice BW, it has an air of melancholy. Maybe it's the form, maybe it's just me.
La France Avatar
March 15, 2016 at 1:56 PM
James, thanks for visiting, maybe its to "lonely hearts club: aspect that seems to give it sadness, but not so, wonderful to be surrounded by friends of like mind...
Kimathi Avatar
March 15, 2016 at 4:36 AM
Greetings BW. Congrats for your awesome first placement in the contest!!!! ;-)
La France Avatar
March 15, 2016 at 2:21 PM
Teddy, thanks for the congrats and the awesome !
Hamilton Avatar
March 15, 2016 at 4:29 AM
superb poem Connie congrats on 1st place hugs
La France Avatar
March 15, 2016 at 2:22 PM
Shadow, thanks for a great contest, and for my wonderful 1st place, I am honored ~
Andresen Avatar
February 15, 2016 at 12:27 PM
- Share hearts and chocolate together, better than being sad alone - A lovely poem, B.W. - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
La France Avatar
February 15, 2016 at 1:01 PM
Anne Lise, thanks for visiting my poem and the lovely, appreciate !
Turner Avatar
February 14, 2016 at 7:10 PM
Sounds like a fun party, Great write, BW. Good luck and HVD :)
La France Avatar
February 14, 2016 at 7:16 PM
Daniel, thanks for visiting, it was wonderful ~
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