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On Valentines Day

I went to a party for lonely hearts, With friends to celebrate singleness; The invitation read, cake, chocolate and tarts. We played games like charades to show our smarts, Truth and Dare was just full of silliness; I went to a party for lonely hearts. We drank pink margaritas and played darts, Home made decorations showed artfulness; The invitation read, cake, chocolate and tarts. The centerpiece was made of fruit parts, Hanging the red lanterns took adeptness; I went to a party for lonely hearts. The party goes to the top of all charts, Conversations were full of absurbness; The invitation read, cake, chocolate and tarts. Memories made, like the most finest arts, Being with friends was blissfulness; I went to a party for lonely hearts, The invitation read, cake, chocolate and tarts. ____________________________ February 14, 2016 Poetry/Villanelle/On Valentines Day Copyright Protected, ID 756-762-0 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. For the contest, Your Valentine Day, 2016 sponsor, Shadow Hamilton First Place

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Date: 3/20/2016 11:23:00 PM
Broken Wings, Congratulations on your "Valentine's Day 2016 WIN." Love LINDA
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Date: 3/21/2016 2:24:00 PM
Linda, thanks for the congratulations and the love !
Date: 3/18/2016 11:54:00 AM
Hey congrats dear for this beautiful Creation and winning the contest!!!
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Date: 3/18/2016 12:09:00 PM
Anand, thanks for the congrats and the beautiful !
Date: 3/17/2016 4:10:00 AM
Hi BW. Congrats for your first placement once again with one of your finest works!!! ;-)
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Date: 3/17/2016 7:33:00 AM
Teddy thanks for visiting with congrats and compliments !
Date: 3/16/2016 8:39:00 PM
Wonderful write, Constance. Enjoyed the party. Congrats and hugs, Bobby
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Date: 3/17/2016 2:20:00 AM
Bobby, thanks for visiting with the wonderful, congrats and hugs !
Date: 3/16/2016 12:53:00 PM
You have a won a Valentine special, Constance! Congrats!
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Date: 3/16/2016 3:33:00 PM
Balveen thanks for visiting with the congratulations
Date: 3/16/2016 10:36:00 AM
Hi Broken Wings, Congrats on your 1st place win for this beautiful poem with its very clever alternating refrains -- The -ness for each second line is also a good device, well done! Cheers, Brian
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Date: 3/16/2016 1:08:00 PM
Brian, thanks for visiting with the beautiful and the compliment. ..
Date: 3/16/2016 1:34:00 AM
Congrats on ur awesome first place win Broken..
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Date: 3/16/2016 8:29:00 AM
Upma, thanks for the congrats and the awesome !
Date: 3/15/2016 9:50:00 PM
Well done Constance, congratulations
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Date: 3/15/2016 9:55:00 PM
Charlie, thanks for visiting with congratulations ~
Date: 3/15/2016 9:38:00 PM
Congratulations Constance!!!
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Constance La France
Date: 3/15/2016 10:00:00 PM
Michael, thanks for visiting with the congratulations, appreciate !
Date: 3/15/2016 6:14:00 PM
Congratulations Constance for your big no.1 well deserved. The Villanelle is rather fun. Love, Joyce
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Constance La France
Date: 3/15/2016 6:16:00 PM
Joyce, thanks for the congratulations, yes I loved the villanelle form !
Date: 3/15/2016 3:43:00 PM
FANTASTICO, both the win AND this cute poem!! Congrats
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Date: 3/15/2016 4:15:00 PM
Andrea, thanks so much for fantastico, love that word, and the compliment and congrats !
Date: 3/15/2016 3:41:00 PM
Congratulations on your 1st place win! Absolutely lovely!!!!
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Constance La France
Date: 3/15/2016 4:17:00 PM
Eve, thanks for the congratulations and the lovely !!!
Date: 3/15/2016 2:00:00 PM
BW, congrats on your top placement in the contest! -luloo
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Date: 3/15/2016 2:23:00 PM
Laura, thanks for visiting with the congrats ~
Date: 3/15/2016 8:51:00 AM
Love your poem, Broken Wings. As James below wrote, "an air of melancholy." Beautifully written, and congrats on your top win. 7, Hugs, Sandra
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Constance La France
Date: 3/15/2016 1:52:00 PM
Sandra, thanks for the love, the beautiful, the congrats, the 7 and the hugs, don't all my writes have melancholy . . .
Date: 3/15/2016 5:45:00 AM
Nice BW, it has an air of melancholy. Maybe it's the form, maybe it's just me.
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Date: 3/15/2016 1:56:00 PM
James, thanks for visiting, maybe its to "lonely hearts club: aspect that seems to give it sadness, but not so, wonderful to be surrounded by friends of like mind...
Date: 3/15/2016 4:36:00 AM
Greetings BW. Congrats for your awesome first placement in the contest!!!! ;-)
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Date: 3/15/2016 2:21:00 PM
Teddy, thanks for the congrats and the awesome !
Date: 3/15/2016 4:29:00 AM
superb poem Connie congrats on 1st place hugs
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Date: 3/15/2016 2:22:00 PM
Shadow, thanks for a great contest, and for my wonderful 1st place, I am honored ~
Date: 2/15/2016 12:27:00 PM
- Share hearts and chocolate together, better than being sad alone - A lovely poem, B.W. - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/15/2016 1:01:00 PM
Anne Lise, thanks for visiting my poem and the lovely, appreciate !
Date: 2/14/2016 9:13:00 PM
Beautiful and sad at the same time! Hugs
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Constance La France
Date: 2/15/2016 12:34:00 AM
Arthur, thanks for visiting with the beautiful, well some can view singleness as sad and some can embrace it as freedom ~
Date: 2/14/2016 7:10:00 PM
Sounds like a fun party, Great write, BW. Good luck and HVD :)
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Constance La France
Date: 2/14/2016 7:16:00 PM
Daniel, thanks for visiting, it was wonderful ~

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