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On Two Old Characters At the Bus Stop

“Well now, I’ve enough dirty knickers to be washin’, That’s why I never got married”. Now listen to them talk For it’s hard not to. He never got married or any of that other nonsense That people bother with. This friendly meeting at Stop No. 2- Two warm bottoms nestled upon The red bench that’s ridged like Unused strips of play dough- Has them engaged with heads near, Eyes scanning the square. See the pigeons flitting between All the unloved and unexposed crumbs, Petty ones mixed with big ones. Hear the funny truth left behind, The crumbs too small for big beaks. No borders with these two, Only the flowing of words and Speech without shame. Thoughts of the day pass Naturally and unpasteurized, Rough and ready from the soil, From one old head to another. “I never dyed my hair. No, never. Never will. I’m an ugly little thing I am” He hums briefly, Nods at her words As he digests them and Gazes at the ground, Then quickly up again. Marriage, hair dye, underwear. The topics of the day at Stop No. 2. Then they part like the pigeons there, Much in the way a flock sets off at once In mutual psychic energy, A resonant communiqué That binds the chaos as one. This rich stream that flows through Two old characters also seems to Flow through another generation, But one I cannot fathom. I wish for that flow of words Instead of staccato formalities, Stiff smiles, and fear of the strange. No fingers to point and no Inflections of the voice. Nothing. No big deal. Just clean empathy and consent Between two living beings. So let’s sit here and see What we can truly agree upon. Marriage and hair dye and underwear. Then let us part like two pigeons After we’ve filled ourselves With the little crumbs.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 5/14/2016 6:27:00 AM
That's the way to go! Congrats on your first entry and welcome to Poetry Soup, Eva. :)
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Date: 5/13/2016 1:40:00 PM
- Eva, Welcome to Poetry Soup with your great first poem - Well written :) - // Sun :)
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Date: 5/13/2016 9:36:00 AM
Eva, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 5/13/2016 8:21:00 AM
Eva, Nice and wonderful first entry. Welcome to poetry soup. Hope you will enjoy our community. Wish you a fruitful journey ahead...........//:) hugs
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Date: 5/13/2016 12:49:00 AM
Eva Wan, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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