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On Troubled Shores - In Search of Nature

shrouded in the mist brooding daughter of nature beckons her lost child

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Elaine George

Date: 5/6/2013 8:47:00 AM

Wonderful Haiku, Tim. The Typewriter is for a contest. In answer to your question - no, I didn't write a best seller - wishful thinking on my part. lol. Elaine

Tahera Mannan

Date: 4/25/2013 10:48:00 PM

beckons her lost child, so lovely. Mant congrats Tim.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/24/2013 8:03:00 PM

Tim, a nice winning Ku' poem... Congratulations in Heather's lovely haiku contest. xox~ Linda

Olusegun Arowolo

Date: 4/24/2013 9:17:00 AM

Lovely write,Tim...Congrats on your win...

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 4/24/2013 5:20:00 AM

many congratulations Tim xx

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 4/23/2013 4:42:00 PM

Nicely done Tim and my congrats on your win. love phyl

Donna Jones

Date: 4/23/2013 1:18:00 PM

Tim....wonderful....congratulations...

Therese Bacha

Date: 4/23/2013 9:01:00 AM

Congratulation Jim, excellent, and sad even for a fish to loose its child. warm to. Love Terry

Colleen Bono

Date: 4/14/2013 10:12:00 PM

good luck.thanks for commenting on my poem for PD.as a grandma who went through it i know how she feels.but,it will be ok.take care

Carrie Richards

Date: 4/14/2013 7:44:00 PM

This stirs up many different ideas in my mind!! Great job!

Harry Horsman

Date: 4/14/2013 3:54:00 PM

wow now that is some Haiku, really gets the imagination going...