on tranquil lake

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glass-like smooth of even's yawn
      just I, myself, with one cob swan
         trace cursive paths upon the lake
   for we’re both OF the earth, not on

so sets the sun to blow a kiss -
      in hushed glissades of feral bliss
         cleaving surface - gentle wakes
   o surely heaven’s much like this

swan and I, we share these eves
      in feathered white tuxedo sleeves
         he follows while I row the skiff -
   my chaperon as daylight leaves

I think perhaps he's lonely, too
      a-searching for a soul-mate who
         shares his love of blushing skies
   and parting mirrored lakes anew

the water's darkened interludes
      reflect both images and moods
         hopes we held of love this morn
   are put to bed as day concludes

ere we meet when dusk is drawn
      I’ll say a prayer that he'll be gone
         that one of us shall find true love ...
   for we’re both OF the earth, not on.

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Date: 8/31/2024 11:52:00 AM
Very beautiful and enchanting, rich wording and images describe this...ethereal piece...:)
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Date: 8/22/2024 6:39:00 AM
in hushed glissades of feral bliss… the water's darkened interludes reflect both images and moods…love the refrain too!
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 8/22/2024 2:35:00 PM
Many kind thanks to you, Kim, it is so greatly appreciated, my friend! Blessings! <3
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