On the Whiteness of the Sand

On the whiteness of the sand 
in the noises of the sea-foam, 
There are dreams, fall down without buried

Ah, O shores,
that germinate death like mushrooms, 
why you germinate (in my mouth) 
a bitter taste?  
  
Ah If you were fell like a rain 
On my heart who never calms down!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Davis Avatar
September 29, 2013 at 8:55 PM
This is full of sadness, sorrow and emotion. Very deep and powerful nice job
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October 2, 2013 at 5:43 PM
I am so happy that you like it dear Robin..!
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September 28, 2013 at 9:17 PM
Hello Fatima, this is deep, kind of like an Epic, dance..... sad, like a fallen star... enjoyed the ending spirit... always~ LINDA
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October 2, 2013 at 5:40 PM
Always you are my best friend here..<3
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