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On the Whiteness of the Sand

On the whiteness of the sand in the noises of the sea-foam, There are dreams, fall down without buried Ah, O shores, that germinate death like mushrooms, why you germinate (in my mouth) a bitter taste? Ah If you were fell like a rain On my heart who never calms down!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 9/29/2013 8:55:00 PM
This is full of sadness, sorrow and emotion. Very deep and powerful nice job
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Fatima Nusairat
Date: 10/2/2013 5:43:00 PM
I am so happy that you like it dear Robin..!
Date: 9/28/2013 9:17:00 PM
Hello Fatima, this is deep, kind of like an Epic, dance..... sad, like a fallen star... enjoyed the ending spirit... always~ LINDA
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Fatima Nusairat
Date: 10/2/2013 5:40:00 PM
Always you are my best friend here..<3

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