Kim Rodrigues Poet Light Verse

On the Tokyo Subway

Tokyo No Chikatetsu

“Godzilla!” the subway sways
bouncing sideways.    quiet.
bonsai ears cultivated,
thoroughfare of sentient earplugs.

jolted, jubilant hilarity

“SHH!” teeth hush too loud
drunken, diabolical boredom

“Godzilla!” with more intensity.
brilliant windows, Japanese
contortionists amuse bad
very bad               Americans


6/28/2019

Title - Tokyo Subway

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Winged Warrior June 29, 2019 at 7:15 AM Godzilla...a timeless character...enjoyed my friend...sending love...^WW^ Kim Rodrigues June 29, 2019 at 8:42 AM Thanks WW!

Michelle Faulkner June 28, 2019 at 11:17 PM Great line 'drunken, diabolical boredom' - terrific, Kim! Kim Rodrigues June 29, 2019 at 6:45 AM Thank you, Michelle!

Line Gauthier June 28, 2019 at 9:07 AM Fabulous imagery, Kim. Kim Rodrigues June 28, 2019 at 9:13 AM Thanks, Line!

Richard Lamoureux June 28, 2019 at 8:29 AM I like your humour. Kim Rodrigues June 28, 2019 at 8:46 AM Thanks, Richard! :)