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On the Tokyo Subway

Tokyo No Chikatetsu “Godzilla!” the subway sways bouncing sideways. quiet. bonsai ears cultivated, thoroughfare of sentient earplugs. jolted, jubilant hilarity “SHH!” teeth hush too loud drunken, diabolical boredom “Godzilla!” with more intensity. brilliant windows, Japanese contortionists amuse bad very bad Americans 6/28/2019 Title - Tokyo Subway

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Date: 6/29/2019 7:15:00 AM
Godzilla...a timeless character...enjoyed my friend...sending love...^WW^
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/29/2019 8:42:00 AM
Thanks WW!
Date: 6/28/2019 11:17:00 PM
Great line 'drunken, diabolical boredom' - terrific, Kim!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/29/2019 6:45:00 AM
Thank you, Michelle!
Date: 6/28/2019 9:07:00 AM
Fabulous imagery, Kim.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/28/2019 9:13:00 AM
Thanks, Line!
Date: 6/28/2019 8:29:00 AM
I like your humour.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/28/2019 8:46:00 AM
Thanks, Richard! :)

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