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On the Rocks Chanco

"On the rocks?", the bartender called,
As I asked for a double Scotch,
To revive my spirits keel-hauled.
By my sleepy shift on night-watch.

On the rocks the liquid gold poured
Making the cold hard ice cubes clink.
Drowner of sorrows, now on board,
Dismay was dragged back from the brink.

On the rocks the ship did flounder
With no stormy tempest in sight,
With watch asleep, the rocks found her,
Not at night, but in broad daylight.

On the rocks now, the storms will rage,
Mercilessly blasting their might,
Building seas, to roaring rampage,
Defying quaffs to set things right.

On the rocks, becalmed distraction
Leaves sails flapping, wanting a breeze
Postponing the need for action,
To get relief and be at ease.

On the rocks, cold as cubes of ice,
Enticing Scotch will not suffice.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Fowler Avatar
July 15, 2023 at 10:00 AM
Nicely done and congrats John! :)
Anderson Avatar
July 15, 2023 at 10:02 AM
Thank you very much. Cheers and All the Best to You
Mcintosh Avatar
July 12, 2023 at 4:24 AM
Congrats on first place with this wonderful write. God bless you always, Love, Gina
Anderson Avatar
July 12, 2023 at 9:47 AM
Lovely to hear from you. Thanks
Rodrigues Avatar
July 11, 2023 at 6:53 PM
Such an interesting chanso, John! Love the liquid poured, the sound of the clinking ice, verse 3 wows me. Congratulations on first place.
Anderson Avatar
July 11, 2023 at 7:32 PM
Thanks very much for your comments. Cheers and Best Wishes,John
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