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On the Rocks

what candle pressed against the wind a winding trail unfolds down the cliffside into the storm where a treasure lies to behold a thousand jagged teeth Peirce the roiling spew a promise of paradise the desperate never knew and down the cliff should you falter lose your balance and fall in hopes of happy ever after soon never after all

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Date: 5/17/2025 6:37:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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