On the Road To Vezalay Part 1

I was on the road to Vezalay, for Richard and his
quest. All the Christian knights would gather from
countries east and west. The papal hordes would
vindicate, and our swords and banners blessed.
As I walked the woods of Avalon, in peace and
serenity. By a stream in the shade, a vision came 
to me. There she stood before me dressed in purist
lace, against the sun her silken form, my eyes 
could easily trace. With her eyes she beckoned me
to a place where blossoms lay. From her shoulder 
the garment slipped, a moon and star above the 
breast stole and transfixed the eye, all was haze 
and peace below the bluest sky. Jasmine filled the
air as we lay that summers day, we questioned 
nought and let our feelings play. Her fingers of 
such tenderness, danced and skipped my 
nakedness. Her skin against my chest, I leant and
kissed the moon above her breast. Longing sighs
and the joining created, sensuous tones until our
love was sated. The evening grew cooler, the light
began to fade, our bodies locked in passion, all was
love in shade.
The morning proved a darker place, of my love there
was no trace. No bright star to light my way, no kind
lips for me to play. I searched with a heavy heart but
could not find, the love the heart so kind. I asked
myself with great contempt, surely not, I had not
dreamt. Then I saw in the blossoms there, lay the
flowers from her hair. With a heavy heart and heavy
soul, duty called and gained control.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 2/10/2010 6:57:00 AM
Ow this poem is extremely Romantic, yet the ending is so sad,but im hoping He will find this girl and put the flower back in her hair,lets read part two,Magnifique,:)Charma
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Date: 2/9/2010 6:23:00 PM
Quite descriptive and interesting.. onto part 2 please..luv.. LInda-Marie..
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Date: 2/9/2010 5:02:00 PM
So sad an ending. Keep the creative pen flowing. Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work. Sara
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