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On the Road To Ruin

You know the road to ruin Quit your job, sleep all day Wake up at night, video games play Stay in your pj's 24/7 Pizza, fries and Coke consume You're on the road to ruin Never see a doctor Ditto for the dentist Pay January's rent in June You're on the road to ruin Throw away your shaver Your toothbrush and your comb Now that your life's completely ruined Post this sign ~ Welcome to my former home

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Date: 2/2/2023 6:00:00 PM
Well said! You must take care of yourself. Why people see that as living is beyond me.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 2/2/2023 7:12:00 PM
Take care? Take air!
Date: 2/2/2023 1:32:00 PM
No sense of direction. Too many people exist, as you say in your explicit poem, Gershon. Take care, Shirley
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 2/2/2023 7:09:00 PM
Existentialism is my specialty... lol
Date: 2/1/2023 8:50:00 PM
The road to ruin is so precisely charted out ! If one travels through this route, he is sure to end up in gutters ! Well written dear Gershon....
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 2/2/2023 7:06:00 PM
Ha, ha! I oughta know... Guttural Gershon

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