Anne-Lise Andresen Poet Couplet

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- On the Right Side of the Moon -

Loving you is easy as the heart sings into your heaven 
Come kiss me sugar before the snow melts

Stunning visions before the mirrors a flame sparks
As two white doves in eternal faithfulness weld us together 

Standing an adoring torch within a breathtaking ray of sunlight 
Dreams that were answered, within soft tenderness beauty and love

Always when you enter number one smiles 
Love's paradise ruby wine flows warm 

I will forever find you interesting sweet dreams 
as you make me forget everything that lies behind

Many moons searching distant horizons 
Coming out slowly from the light my dear

As I stared into the stars thoughts within you entered
Brilliant beauty a miracle dawns new horizons  
 
Darling captivating your precious light holds me 
Each time seeing you is like I have known you a lifetime beyond anything 

We travel down the starlit path only for eternity
Heaven's whisper creating our future and dreams






 

A Collaborated Poem 
Anne-Lise Andresen and Liam Mc Daid
24.02.2016
(unrhymed couplets)

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Pashang Salehi April 7, 2016 at 11:46 PM This is very nice, congratulations. Anne-Lise Andresen April 8, 2016 at 4:48 AM - Pashang, thanks for the congrats and visits :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Suraj Jumani March 18, 2016 at 1:48 AM A real beauty, evokes the subtle and sublime feeling that is love. Anne-Lise Andresen March 18, 2016 at 4:11 AM - Thanks for the delighted visits and lovely comments on our poem, Suraj :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Richard Lamoureux March 13, 2016 at 7:14 PM I see this was POTW! Congrats! Anne-Lise Andresen March 14, 2016 at 4:29 AM - Richard, thanks for the congrats and comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Eve Roper March 5, 2016 at 9:33 PM Wonderful write, Anne Lise! Congratulations on poem of the week Hugs Anne-Lise Andresen March 14, 2016 at 4:29 AM - Eve, thanks for the congrats and comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Tom Quigley March 5, 2016 at 3:29 PM Amazing flow of images and emotions! Anne-Lise Andresen March 14, 2016 at 4:28 AM - Thanks for the delighted visits and lovely comments on our poem, Tom :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Theresa Cw March 5, 2016 at 12:24 AM Wow!! It is always a great treasure and pleasure to read all of your poetic devices... You and Liam really do make beautiful music or may I say beauty of rhyme together... love and hugs // Theresa Anne-Lise Andresen March 5, 2016 at 8:38 AM - Thanks for the delighted visits and lovely comments on our poem, Theresa :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Charlie Smith March 3, 2016 at 2:27 PM The wonder of Love...Great work again, congratulations again, Lise and Liam Anne-Lise Andresen March 3, 2016 at 2:29 PM - Charlie, thanks for the congrats and comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Rainbow Promise March 2, 2016 at 9:20 PM T Anne Lise and Liam, congrats on your making POTW. What a collaboration! Thanks for sharing and God bless, RP. Anne-Lise Andresen March 3, 2016 at 2:28 AM - Thanks for the congrats, Rainbow :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Constance La France March 2, 2016 at 8:07 AM Anne Lise and Liam, congratulations on Poem of the Week with this beautiful love poem, so sweetly penned, I am loving it 7 ~ Anne-Lise Andresen March 2, 2016 at 8:24 AM - Thanks B.W. for the congrats and a 7 :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Debra Mundine March 1, 2016 at 4:54 PM Great poem, although I must say you two are overly romantic. Reminds me of some of Shakespere's work. Anne-Lise Andresen March 2, 2016 at 3:33 AM - Debra, thank you for your visit and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Liam Mcdaid March 1, 2016 at 4:12 AM Thank you everyone for the heartfelt beautiful comments Anne lise truly a pleasure writing this with you congratulations on poem of the week wishing you all a blessed beautiful week Anne-Lise Andresen March 1, 2016 at 4:17 AM :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Daniel Turner February 29, 2016 at 9:20 PM I have previously left a comment just dropping back by to say congratulations on the poem of the week to the both of you. Looking forward to reading more. Peace my friends:) Anne-Lise Andresen March 1, 2016 at 3:17 AM - Liam and me have written many poems together ...... and there will be more, I hope :) - Thanks for the congrats, Daniel :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison February 29, 2016 at 5:26 PM many congrats to you both on poem of the week:-) hugs Jan xx Anne-Lise Andresen March 1, 2016 at 3:13 AM - Thanks for the congrats, Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Tim Smith February 29, 2016 at 12:04 PM Congrats on POTW you two...beautifully penned Anne-Lise Andresen February 29, 2016 at 1:01 PM - Thanks for the congrats, Tim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Amy Guy February 27, 2016 at 11:47 AM Love!! Anne-Lise Andresen February 27, 2016 at 11:54 AM - Nice to see you Amy, thanks for visiting and comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Scott Thirtyseven February 26, 2016 at 8:30 AM I think that it would be better to change the last two words of the 4th line around. "us together", rather than "together us". I quite enjoy the romanticism you convey in this piece, a slice of heaven. Anne-Lise Andresen February 26, 2016 at 8:36 AM - ............ Ups .... why have none seen it earlier ...... maybe we did not read it properly :) - Thank you my friend, Scott - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Abdullah Alhemaidy February 26, 2016 at 8:09 AM Lovely! Anne-Lise Andresen February 26, 2016 at 8:37 AM - Thanks for the delighted visits and lovely comments on our poem, Abdullah - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Mark Peterson February 25, 2016 at 8:22 PM And may it ever be so, for what could improve on this. Anne-Lise Andresen February 26, 2016 at 2:11 AM - Mark, thanks for the delighted visits and lovely comments on our poem :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kelly Crenshaw February 25, 2016 at 7:55 PM Wow. Inspiring imagery. Enjoyed it start to finish. Stop by and read my gibberish sometime. :-) Anne-Lise Andresen February 26, 2016 at 2:13 AM - A pleasure to share with you, Kelly :) - Thank you for reading our poem and left a nice comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Cherl Dunn February 25, 2016 at 6:43 PM Dear Anne Lise WOW great collaboration, perfect blending of poetic thoughts of devotion, loved it, cheri Anne-Lise Andresen February 26, 2016 at 2:12 AM - Dear Cherl, greatly appreciate your words and visits :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison February 25, 2016 at 4:34 PM such a beautiful collaboration Anne Lise and Liam:-) hugs Jan xx Anne-Lise Andresen February 26, 2016 at 2:10 AM - Thank you for reading our poem and left a nice comments, Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Suzanne Delaney February 25, 2016 at 11:49 AM That is a beautiful love poem. I did not realize it was a collab until I got to the end. Well done you two. suZ Anne-Lise Andresen February 25, 2016 at 1:42 PM - We write with the same pen and ink, SuZ :) - Many thanks for enjoyable visit and great comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sara Kendrick February 25, 2016 at 9:54 AM Ahh!! Great love collaboration.,.Enjoyed reading this one.Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara Anne-Lise Andresen February 25, 2016 at 1:36 PM - Thanks for the delighted visits and lovely comments on our poem, Sara - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Richard Lamoureux February 25, 2016 at 9:54 AM You an Liam work so well together. Well done. Anne-Lise Andresen February 25, 2016 at 1:40 PM - Richard, thank you for reading our poem and left a nice comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Eileen Manassian February 25, 2016 at 9:47 AM :) Sunshine....this time you let the nighttime speak of romance and love...celestial bodies dance to you and Liam's song. Hugs Anne-Lise Andresen February 25, 2016 at 1:40 PM - Sweet music and dancing in the moonlight :))) - Thank you for reading our poem and left a nice comments, Eileen :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

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