On the Public Square

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This is not me..I like the movie called " Something To Talk About"..I got the idea from a scene in the movie..

There once was an old man from Thomaston Who was lying, cheating son-of-a-gun Out in public on the square Nailed was he in open air Still dodging bullets as swiftly runs Sponsor: Black-Eyed Susan Contest: Nailed Or Failed Theme chosen: Nailed Click on about this poem

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Robin Davis

Date: 4/10/2014 11:00:00 PM

Sarah Such a fun and creative write. Is he still running from the bullets. LOL Thank you for the nice comment on my Antiques poem.

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 6/9/2012 8:12:00 PM

hey

Jack Horne

Date: 6/7/2012 10:49:00 AM

LOL, glad you mentioned this one : )

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/7/2012 3:48:00 AM

A funny one Sara...like it a lot. - Have a lovely day. - oxox Anne-Lise

Charles Henderson

Date: 6/6/2012 11:27:00 PM

I do not do limerick very well, but this is very good.

Painted Hunter

Date: 6/5/2012 6:19:00 PM

Nice one, Sarah! Limericks are so much fun. By the way, I very much enjoyed your memory contest...I hadn't thought about mamaw ollie's butterscotch for a while before I saw your contest. Thank you.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/5/2012 2:47:00 PM

you nailed it, sara... splendid meter and content... on to the winners' list!..:) hugggs!

Karen Deeks

Date: 6/5/2012 3:32:00 AM

ha ha ha ... just always love that lying cheating son of a gun.... you write so comfortably .... thanks sara and for reading of kenya... they do sound the same :)