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On the Pier

The sweet smell of salt air Sooths a difficult day Gazing far and away At the pier's end Sitting dangling my feet I breathe deep of the sea The gulls calling to me Noise fades away Sun slips beyond my sight Painting with hues of pink Of such beauty I drink Thoughts turn to you Barbara Gorelick 7/9/14 On The Pier contest....

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Date: 7/9/2014 9:07:00 PM
What a nice poem Barbara,very warm and comfortable..the last stanza is perfect
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Date: 7/9/2014 6:44:00 PM
Watch out Barbara Tim is liable to push you in. Nicely painted picture of a sunset on the pier and of a lover waiting by the sea. Should do well in the contest.
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Date: 7/9/2014 2:15:00 PM
How wonderful..Is there any room next to you? ....hugs Tim
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Date: 7/9/2014 2:08:00 PM
Very beautiful pic Barbara! Gl in contest!
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Date: 7/9/2014 2:00:00 PM
lovely imagery Barbara good luck in the contest. hugs Jan
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